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writeALONG 8 July 2025

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh

guest editor: Kanjini Devi


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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Māori gods, or atua, are supernatural beings that represent aspects of the natural world and the human experience.  Their stories explain the origins of the universe, people, and natural phenomena from a Māori worldview.  This week, we look for inspiration from Tāwhirimātea, god of weather who controls thunder, lightning, wind, clouds and storms.


How do storms affect you?  Do you enjoy the rain, or do you prefer sunshine?

 

The prompt for your haiku/senryu this week is storms or any of the other aspects presided over by Tāwhirimātea.  Here are some examples:-


coming with frost

the wind lies down to sleep

with a deserted child

 

Basho (tr. Jane Reichhold)

 

 

hot dry wind

an echidna's hole

filling with dust

 

Lorraine Haig

 

 

mud roads in monsoon

     women lift their saris

knee-high

 

Kala Ramesh


Write haiku / senryu inspired by Tāwhirimātea, god of weather who controls thunder, lightning, wind, clouds and storms.

 

5 Comments


Ron C. Moss
Ron C. Moss
14 minutes ago

haiku#1


tumbling thunder

a broken red crayon

soft to the touch


Ron C. Moss

Tasmania, Australia

Comments Welcomed


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Alan Summers
Alan Summers
an hour ago

haiku #1


storm front

the new rain horizontal

as distal phalanges


Alan Summers

UK


note:

  • Summer: Thunderstorms and heavy downpours often bring strong winds, potentially causing horizontal rain. 

  • Context:

    The term "horizontal rain" is often used in everyday language to describe intense, wind-driven rain, especially when it's impacting personal experience. 

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Sherry Reniker
Sherry Reniker
3 hours ago

#1 7/7/25


camping

a splish-splash

thunder moon


Sherry Reniker, USA

feedback welcome


summer kigo: thunder moon (July)


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Alan Summers
Alan Summers
an hour ago
Replying to

camping

a splish-splash

thunder moon


or more of a phrase, e.g.


camping

a la splish-splash

thunder moon


camping

all splish-splash

thunder moon


etc...?

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
6 hours ago

#1

 

wide awake…

still zinging

after the storm

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

Feedback welcome

 


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