writeALONG 8 July 2025
- Padma Rajeswari
- 6 hours ago
- 2 min read
A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh
guest editor: Kanjini Devi
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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Māori gods, or atua, are supernatural beings that represent aspects of the natural world and the human experience. Their stories explain the origins of the universe, people, and natural phenomena from a Māori worldview. This week, we look for inspiration from Tāwhirimātea, god of weather who controls thunder, lightning, wind, clouds and storms.
How do storms affect you? Do you enjoy the rain, or do you prefer sunshine?
The prompt for your haiku/senryu this week is storms or any of the other aspects presided over by Tāwhirimātea. Here are some examples:-
coming with frost
the wind lies down to sleep
with a deserted child
Basho (tr. Jane Reichhold)
hot dry wind
an echidna's hole
filling with dust
Lorraine Haig
mud roads in monsoon
women lift their saris
knee-high
Kala Ramesh
Write haiku / senryu inspired by Tāwhirimātea, god of weather who controls thunder, lightning, wind, clouds and storms.
haiku#1
tumbling thunder
a broken red crayon
soft to the touch
Ron C. Moss
Tasmania, Australia
Comments Welcomed
haiku #1
storm front
the new rain horizontal
as distal phalanges
Alan Summers
UK
note:
Summer: Thunderstorms and heavy downpours often bring strong winds, potentially causing horizontal rain.
Context:
The term "horizontal rain" is often used in everyday language to describe intense, wind-driven rain, especially when it's impacting personal experience.
#1 7/7/25
camping
a splish-splash
thunder moon
Sherry Reniker, USA
feedback welcome
summer kigo: thunder moon (July)
#1
wide awake…
still zinging
after the storm
Joanna Ashwell
UK
Feedback welcome