writeALONG 8 July 2025
- Padma Rajeswari 
- Jul 8
- 2 min read
A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh
guest editor: Kanjini Devi
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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Māori gods, or atua, are supernatural beings that represent aspects of the natural world and the human experience. Their stories explain the origins of the universe, people, and natural phenomena from a Māori worldview. This week, we look for inspiration from Tāwhirimātea, god of weather who controls thunder, lightning, wind, clouds and storms.
How do storms affect you? Do you enjoy the rain, or do you prefer sunshine?
The prompt for your haiku/senryu this week is storms or any of the other aspects presided over by Tāwhirimātea. Here are some examples:-
coming with frost
the wind lies down to sleep
with a deserted child
Basho (tr. Jane Reichhold)
hot dry wind
an echidna's hole
filling with dust
Lorraine Haig
mud roads in monsoon
women lift their saris
knee-high
Kala Ramesh
Write haiku / senryu inspired by Tāwhirimātea, god of weather who controls thunder, lightning, wind, clouds and storms.

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wet footprints
steam hovers mid-air
becoming
Kavita Ratna
India
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Feedback most welcome
Post #2
14.7.25
crows circle
the blood stained snow
distant bombing
Mona Bedi
India
Feedback appreciated:)
#2
13-07-25
plump tears
on toddlers cheeks—
rolling thunder
Padma Priya
India
feedback welcome
#2
16th. July 2025 (new version)
(Revised with enormous thanks to Kanjini)
cable carnage
a Clouded Yellow
pulsing on leaves
-Vaishnavi Ramaswamy, India
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#2
14th. July 2025 (keeping my original)
(Thanks to Mohua for the valuable feedback)
aftermath ...
cables bearing
the carnage of trees
-Vaishnavi Ramaswamy, India
(Feedback Welcome)
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#2
13th. July 2025 (older version)
(Revised with many thanks to Sherry)
aftermath ...
on the carnage of leaves
a clouded yellow flitting
-Vaishnavi Ramaswamy, India
(Feedback Welcome
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#2 (original)
12th. July 2025
aftermath ...
cables bearing
the carnage of trees
-Vaishnavi Ramaswamy, India
(Feedback Welcome)
#2, 11/07
stormy winds . . .
the rain just drops
by
Lakshmi Iyer, India
Feedback welcome