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triveni spotlight : 3 may

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh guest editor: Jenny Ward Angyal

theme: Earthsongs



morning,

cobbled together

with birdsong—

the answer to prayers

comes in many forms


—David Terelinck

Slow Growing Ivy, 2014




7 commentaires


Debbie Strange
Debbie Strange
31 mai 2022


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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
04 mai 2022

morning,

cobbled together

with birdsong—

the answer to prayers

comes in many forms


—David Terelinck Most poignantly written. I particularly liked the two punctuation - most essential here. Ls 4 & 5 - elevates this tanka to a high note.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
03 mai 2022

Loved L4 and L5

'the answers to prayers

comes in many forms'

I literally have this feeling but could'nt express as Jenny has done. Thank you so much to bring out such poems for us to comtemplate upon!

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sanjuktaa
03 mai 2022

Beautiful poem with beautiful images!

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What a lovely poem to wake up to this morning. No matter what sort of tasks the day ahead requires I always find the dawn chorus uplifting.

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