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triveni spotlight: 29th October 2023

Updated: Oct 29, 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Kala Ramesh and Vidya Shankar GUEST EDITOR: Keiko Izawa 29th October 2023


yoso ni naru yonaga no tokei kazoekeri


long night

counting the clock chimes

from a neighbor’s home


Hisajo Sugita (1890 – 1946)

from Internet

long night: autumn kigo



During this month, I’d like to introduce contemporary Japanese haiku, including kigo, which are referred to as “yūki haiku(有季俳句)”. In yūki haiku, toriawase (matching kigo and the remaining phrases) is the key point, not to mention its creativity and originality. In my view, Japanese haiku are generally simple compared to English (language) haiku, but the subtle sensibility is embedded within as the synergies with the power of kigo. I hope you enjoy karumi (lightness) blended with seasonality in these haiku.

Keiko Izawa

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Thank you for being our next guest editor Keiko Izawa You are bringing something fresh and this is going to be a treat for all our members. _()_

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Oct 30, 2023

Lovely visual treat!!

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Oct 30, 2023
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Thank you, Lakshmi, for the comment.

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
Oct 29, 2023

This haiku is beautiful, thank you for sharing.

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Oct 29, 2023
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You’re welcome, Joanna. Thank you for the comment 🍀

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Vidya Shankar
Vidya Shankar
Oct 29, 2023

Such a deep experience, this one. Thank you for sharing this ku, Keiko.

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Oct 29, 2023
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Glad you liked this, Vidya🌌

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Eavonka Ettinger
Eavonka Ettinger
Oct 28, 2023

I, too, had a long sleepless night. So this poem is perfect for today. Thank you, Keiko, for such a wonderful journey this month.

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Oct 28, 2023
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Thank you for the kind words, Eavonka. I also enjoyed your comments here. There’s one last poem left for this month🙂

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Bonnie J Scherer
Bonnie J Scherer
Oct 28, 2023

Thanks for enriching our poetic lives Keiko. ❤️

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Oct 28, 2023
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You’re so welcome, Bonnie☺️

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