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THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 31st July 2025. Lorraine Haig - Guest Poet

host: Rupa Anand

mentor: Lorraine Haig editors on haikuKATHA: Shalini Pattabiraman, Vidya Shankar, Firdaus Parvez and Kala Ramesh

Guest Poet: Lorraine Haig

A Thursday Feature

31st July 2025 - openHALL


THE HAIBUN GALLERY  July 2025: Lorraine Haig


Prompt It's something we have never tried in this forum before - it's openHALL this week!

Let’s write about anything that you've always wanted to try out as a haibun, but something prevented you from stepping into those uncharted waters!


The field is yours!!


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Thank you a lot, Lorraine, for providing us with prompts for an entire month.


_kala


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68 hozzászólás


mona bedi
mona bedi
20 hours ago

Post #1

2.8.25


A castle in the sky


On a beautiful spring morning, I get up with a smile. I am nineteen and full of youth. A gentle breeze ruffles the curtains, carrying with it the sweet scent of lavender blooms. I pick a pink dress with tulle to go with my mood. Pairing it with pink ballerinas I step into the garden. Sunflowers smile at me. A yellow butterfly perches on my shoulder. Far away a cloud plays hide and seek with the sun. I run, twirl

and dance with the flowers.

“Have you dozed off nana?” my eight year old granddaughter asks tugging at my dupatta.

“No dear…I was visiting Alice’s Wonderland“ I say with a smile.


county…


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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
3 hours ago
Válasz címzettje:

This is a sweet reminiscent story, but the details seem to describe a girl much younger than nineteen. Maybe change the age for a more credible story line?

I love the ku which works well with the title and prose.

Kedvelés

Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
a day ago

#2


A Sonnet Postscript to an Accordion's Cantata


Dance Trio after Freddy Mercury: The crossed-out subtitle treatise on interruption glows in pink highliner on all modern scores. The second mouvement's calm, interrupting a brassy Broadway show-stopper and a bass baritone rapping non-stop each world-known lyric, is a  ten minute void which retains a pure religious vision.


ancient manuscripts

unrestrained peace

before the first comet


Theme and Copacabana Variations: Tympanis outbang brass and wind exhaltation, a prélude to twelve seconds of silence before the prolonged cadenza: the only time the accordion plays. Whispers of a dancer's tango sway while harps and strings glissando and tremolo on high wires: the frisson that gives the concert hall reason to applaud my otherwise très avant-garde sound fest.


first…


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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
3 hours ago
Válasz címzettje:

Thank you so much, Joanna, for commenting on this rather unique poem.

Kedvelés

Alan Summers
Alan Summers
2 days ago

Ferry Across The Mersey

Alan Summers

UK


Ferry Across The Mersey


If you are from Liverpool, England, you might be known as Liverpudlians, or Scousers. But I didn’t know the name Scousers derives from the Scandinavian lobscouse stew, popular throughout Northern Europe, and the port city of Liverpool of course. If someone talks Scouse in this city, it’s more likely to be the accent and dialect, as much as it’s about hot food.


frosting from danish to upper lip winter sun


It’s now cold waiting for the ferry, even though I’ve had a bacon butty and a mug of useful coffee from the Fab4 Café (aka The Beatles) from the Gerry Marsden Ferry Terminal ticket complex.


Now Gerry Marsden and the Pacemakers is also a pop…


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Alan Summers
Alan Summers
a day ago
Válasz címzettje:

Great! I hope you liked my award-winning haibun Snow Hill to Selfridges then! 😀☃️

Kedvelés

joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
2 days ago

#2

 

Moon Dive

 

blue jay feathers this ocean blue of falling

 

How did we become all of this.  More separate than together.  Buttons oddly sewn on a jacket.  There is no seam to pull us back to whole.

 

silver raindrops already gone wishing well

 

These words that pass through air, already out of pitch with what we want to hear.  There is no sheet to follow, no map, no instruction manual.  Love is broken.

 

pine needles holding a green we long for

 

Home.  The place we can no longer find within ourselves.  Lost in a colour-wash world of parting.  The moon blind shine of darkness.

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

Feedback welcome

 


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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
3 hours ago
Válasz címzettje:

Thank you so much Mona.

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Diana Webb
Diana Webb
2 days ago

The Novelty of Novello


Dusk. A song plays out from a BBC radio station all over London.


'We'll gather lilacs'


In a Swiss Cottage apartment,she settles down to await a call as the last of the sunlight touches a painting on the wall.


scent wafts up

sound of the elevator

rising


'in the spring'


The nurse in the convalescent home at the south west edge of the M25 tucks her in with a smile of reassurance.


rest after hip job

a favourite footpath

beckons again


'down an English lane'


The American couple look out from their hotel window overlooking Hyde Park.


traffic thrum

postcards of thatched cottages

rustle in a bag


'to sing again'


From a high rise block she…


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Diana Webb
Diana Webb
2 days ago
Válasz címzettje:

Thanks Joanna

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