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THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 19th March 2026. Linda Papanicolaou - Guest Editor

Editors on haikuKATHA: Shalini Pattabiraman, Vidya Shankar, Firdaus Parvez and Kala Ramesh


Guest Editor: Linda Papanicolaou

Featured Poet: Michael Rehling

Host: Srinivas Sambangi

A Thursday Feature

19th March 2026


in my mind i still need a place to go

Michael Rehling


casual as the moon. my mind wanders through the big dipper and into

countless stars. as i gather myself deep into old age and the sky seems to

have a strange pull. wondering where will i go when this body ceases to

breathe for me and with each celestial movement another question appears

in my mind. meanings and the blue blue mountains behind the sky will

materialize later. but right now a trillion stars beg me to stop counting

them…


in the quiet

of night sky

buddha stares back


—Facebook Jun 9 2025


Commentary:

Experiments we commonly see with the prose in haibun include fragment

or run-on sentences, non-standard punctuation, justification, or page

layout… In his case, the prose is all in lower- case letters such as we

generally associate with E. E. Cummings. In haiku it conveys simplicity, and

the open-ended immediacy of a moment in time. Here, the humility of the

lower-case first person “i” dovetails with the haibun’s Buddhist theme.

Punctuation is not run-on; rather, a simple period articulates both clauses

and sentences, trailing off into an ellipses at the end. Rather than

compress the prose, the effect is a measured rhythm, almost like breathing.


As for descriptive detail, here it’s the purpose is not objective but an

inwardly focused soliloquy where the mind “wanders through the big

dipper” as “countless stars: become “a trillion starts beg[ging] me to stop

counting them.” So much for those who say that haikai forms shouldn’t be

anthropomorphic!


Prompt:


Write a haibun with imagery that is purely subjective.

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One day or the other, we will all experience what Michael Rehling says. Another thought provoking prompt this week.


And, thank you Linda for being with us through this month!

_Srinivas


52 Comments


#1 Revised


With Linda Papanicolaou’s input.


The Swallow Nest


Business is slow and quiet. I busy myself opening the teashop--- sweeping, wiping the furniture, kneading dough for chapatti, boiling milk. I hate doing the last chore. Suddenly I hear the chirpings of the swallows. They must be couple hopping from corner to corner, conversing. I wish I could understand them. They make a few trips back and forth.


Our community believes swallows bring fortune and good luck if they build their nests in a house.  


surveying my house

I keep

my fingers crossed

 

Tejendra Sherchan, Nepal

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Dear Linda,


I express to you my deep gratitude for your kindest feedback with suggestion. I’ll certainly do the needful.


In the haikai spirit,


Tejendra

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Liquid Blue


The walls have lost their density. They pulse. A forest I’ve never visited breathes through the plaster. I reach for the glass on the nightstand. My fingers dissolve into the light before the touch. No floor. Only the cold, velvet hum of a cello string stretched inside my skull. Time is no longer a line. It is a blue ink drop spreading in a bowl of milk. I am blurring. I don’t wait for the morning. I wait for the ceiling to finally let go.


falling —

the weight of a shadow

against my skin


Jacek Margolak

Poland

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I love the creativity, the imagery, the thread that you have running through this piece Jacek. I feel the spread of colour, of presence. 'my fingers dissolve .../velvet hum... blue ink drop - so many wonderful lines that delight the reader. Beautifully written Jacek.

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Where the soil thins…


They have always blessed me. Though some days they are restless and cranky. After all they were babies once. When that happens my life goes haywire and I feel lost in a jungle.


wild nasturtiums

slowly the horizon burns


Arvinder Kaur

Chandigarh India

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Such a great and thought-provoking link from the prose to the nasturtiums Arvinder.

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Nexus

 

i am here yet not     only the body           the mind is elsewhere   so often is the case            wildflowers tempt me         their dance on the breeze          their colours 

afloat in a dream                i see a cloud and wonder          is there more than rain

within            the rainbow surely has an end somewhere   will i find it                perhaps           the star above shines for me                   yet so many miles

stretch beyond our comprehension                    bumblebees  i’ve wandered again 

butterflies      ladybirds       birdsong           moonlight      wild horses  

 

a brimstone butterfly

skims my window

today I settle here

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

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Thank you so much Linda. 🦋

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Encounter on the street


The lady with elaborate hats, my elder by fifteen years, calls me Monsieur Neige, because she says when she doesn't see me in the neighborhood, she knows I must be at the chalet in the Alps. She told me you can bargain with doctors. I ask can you bargain with death? She scolds me with fondness. I have not yet come to rest on the plateau of acceptance.

setting sun

her smile is as wide

as life itself


Alfred Booth

Lyon, France

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Thank you, Linda.

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