HAIKUsutradhar. weekly prompts
A FRIDAY FEATURE
28th July Lev Hart, the mentor for HAIKUsutradhar, would be pleased to answer your questions and concerns.
hosts: Kala Ramesh
the month of July: Baisali Chatterjee Dutt
Prompt: openHALL
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founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh
associate editors:
Ashish Narain
Firdaus Parvez Hemapriya Chellappan
Priti Aisola Sanjuktaa Asopa
Shalini Pattabiraman
Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar
Vidya Shankar
Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA At the moment we are not looking at found poetry, rengay and other split sequences. Other than haiga, no photos are to be shared on our blog on account of storage/memory limitations.
................................................................................................................................. Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai, Akila G. and Reid Hepworth are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best. Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar stepped down earlier in the year for personal reasons. A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets. Associate Editors, Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us. A huge welcome to all these three lovely poets. _()_ ........... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS: Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY Please do visit: 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Good poems and challenges are posted in these feature forums. ........
The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month.
Due to a sudden increase in activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:
1. From July 1st onwards only 2 haiku (numbered 1& 2) per week/prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. 2. Please do not post two poems in one day/in 24 hours ... just one and in total only 2 poems per week from Friday to Friday.
2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!
3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.
4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please do not give. 5. Most importantly, please do not post a variety of drafts, along with a request for readers to choose which they like most. Only one poem is to be posted. 6. If you revise your poem, please post the revision above the original. When selecting poems for haikuKATHA, the team will assume that the version on top is the one you prefer.
Please do not delete your original.
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Post your best haiku and let's have each issue with your best work.
Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.
Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies and contest winners that were published elsewhere will not be accepted.
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Prompt 4:
openHALL Welcome back! to this space where we create our own prompt, own verse!
Today is the third Friday of this month! and we offer openHALL to open up your muse. In the last three weeks, we have brought you some beautiful flowers. And for now, you are also welcome to freewheel as that is what openHALL is all about! Either way, do pour in! Have fun! Give us your best cut!
#1
childhood again...
the reverberation
of stick hitting stone
~feedback welcome~
#1
Revised - Thanks to Kala Ramesh, Sumitra Kumar
the snoring couple
on my bus-ride home …
a jugalbandi
Original
a jugalbandi
for my bus ride home
the snoring couple
(Feedback please. Deliberately avoided “duet”, though the word is probably common in Carnatic music. I miss a “when”. Could have made it “a jugalbandi eve”. The syllable count would then rise to 16! I am not sure if the two images are clearly separated. Am I telling in L1+ L2?)
#1
edited version: (after Lev's inputs)
breaking news
creases deepen
on ammi's forehead
original:
breaking news
cracks deepen
on ammi's forehead
ammi: mother
#2
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bangle shards
smelting into fragile links
sharp memories
Feedback welcome
#2
midsummer shower
a street child rushes
to pick mangoes
feedback most welcome...