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HAIKUsutradhar : 27th May 2022

Updated: May 28, 2022

HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

month of May: Marion Clarke



Picture Prompt . The Moody Sea


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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Akila G. Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez

Madhuri Pillai

Priti Aisola

Shalini Pattabiraman

Shobhana Kumar Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry. ..................................................................................................... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE LINKS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ........................................................................................................ The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal from December 2021 onwards! Due to to the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for all the three groups:

1. TWO poems per day.

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished poems.


Poems previously published on your personal webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, it is the poet's duty to decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.


Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.


On your comment thread you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.


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The Prompt


Seascapes are a wonderful source of inspiration for writers. It could be the turquoise, sparkling waters of a holiday beach, waves crashing on a rocky shore in winter, or the salty air and sounds of a bustling harbor. The beach is filled with sensual imagery: crying gulls, racing clouds, flapping kites, the savoring of a picnic, shrieks of excited children, the jingle of an ice cream van or call of a drinks vendor, sweet ice cream or candy floss/cotton candy melting on your tongue, a flask of hot coffee looking out at a stormy sea, the roughness of stones, gritty sand or shells crunching underfoot. You could listen to a soundtrack of waves and dream up a seascape in a haiku.

crying gull

the length

of this grief




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Nice to see your haiku to a wider perspective of our prompt photo, Marion. Very nice.

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A great picture ku. Like you with Marcie, you inspired this response.Or a more succinct version “rainbows end”.

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Bell rock lighthouse

an up tick

in the artist’s brush

original


Bell rock light house

the sweep of

the artist’s brush

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Jun 03, 2022
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Yes, for sure!

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Jun 03, 2022

the bite

of your words

sand fleas

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Jun 03, 2022
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Thanks, my friend! 😊

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Jun 03, 2022

Thank you, Marion and Sangita!


Revised:

beach glass

the range

of our moods


Original:

beach glass

the differences

between us

feedback appreciated!

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Jun 05, 2022
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