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HAIKUsutradhar : 24th June 2022

Updated: Jun 29, 2022

HAIKUsutradhar. weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

month of June: Paresh Tiwari



Picture Prompt


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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Akila G. Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez

Madhuri Pillai

Priti Aisola

Shalini Pattabiraman

Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry. ..................................................................................................... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE LINKS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ........................................................................................................ The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal from December 2021 onwards! To the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for all the three groups:

1. TWO poems per day / 24 hours!

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished poems.


Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.


Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.


On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.


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The Prompt




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sushamakapur
sushamakapur
2022年7月08日

.

a perfect red

too hard

to resist

.

いいね!

Daipayan  Nair
Daipayan Nair
2022年7月01日

ice gola cart –

each couple selects

a different flavour


or


ice gola cart –

the couple selects

a mix of flavours

いいね!
Daipayan  Nair
Daipayan Nair
2022年7月01日
返信先

Thanks, Alan!

いいね!

bees gathering the pot of gold


いいね!

wedding day over

we go back to

the same normal

いいね!
Alan Summers
Alan Summers
2022年7月02日
返信先

Yes, seen "Art of Persia" and Persian art many times, as part of my private readings of history as well as art.


Alan

いいね!

Daipayan  Nair
Daipayan Nair
2022年7月01日

Revised, thanks to Alan


Revised:


wife's frown—

the saree on our

anniversary


Original:


wife's frown—

the saree I gift on our

anniversary

いいね!
Daipayan  Nair
Daipayan Nair
2022年7月01日
返信先

A great suggestion, Alan. Doing without "I gift" in L2 does work beautifully, now that you mentioned it...

いいね!
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