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HAIKUsutradhar : 17th June 2022

HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

month of June: Paresh Tiwari



Open Prompt . Open Hall


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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Akila G. Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez

Madhuri Pillai

Priti Aisola

Shalini Pattabiraman

Shobhana Kumar Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry. ..................................................................................................... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE LINKS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ........................................................................................................ The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal from December 2021 onwards! Due to to the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for all the three groups:

1. TWO poems per day.

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished poems.


Poems previously published on your personal webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, it is the poet's duty to decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.


Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.


On your comment thread you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.


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The Prompt


(HeHo HeHo ....) Close your eyes, because a surprise is waiting for you. ;)


Yes! here we are with the second OPEN HALL (open prompt) of HAIKUsutradhar, month of June. An opportunity for all to let the wings of their creativity spread wide and fly in the sky of twinkling words. Write whatever comes to your mind, whatever your heart feels, whatever your eyes see, whatever sounds your ears are dancing to, spell your voice, tell us what reflects your soul the most. We are waiting for your amazing poetry, holding our breath.


Give us your best shot.

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Iffah  Peerzada
Iffah Peerzada
30 Jun 2022

Serenity


I think the words ambience and drenched can be replaced by something...lighter, if you know what I mean. All feedback welcome.

Suka

samir satam
samir satam
27 Jun 2022

my dog

brings his leash...

curfew news

Suka

Iffah  Peerzada
Iffah Peerzada
26 Jun 2022

My mother's smile

Makes every diamond

Dimmer than coal

Suka

Iffah  Peerzada
Iffah Peerzada
26 Jun 2022

Dark circles

The spilled shadows

Of my mind


All feedback welcome

Suka
Barrie Levine
Barrie Levine
26 Jun 2022
Membalas kepada

Great image!

Suka

warm water...

a dip into

deep thoughts

Suka
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