HAIKUsutradhar. weekly prompts
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hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang month of July: Terri French
Textual Prompt
haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!
founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh
associate editors:
Akila G. Ashish Narain
Firdaus Parvez
Madhuri Pillai
Priti Aisola
Shalini Pattabiraman
Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar
Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry. ..................................................................................................... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE LINKS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ........................................................................................................ The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal from December 2021 onwards! With the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for this forum:
1. ONLY ONE POEM PER DAY / 24 hours!
2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!
3. Post only your unpublished poems.
Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.
Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.
4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.
Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.
On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)
Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.
Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.
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The Prompt
Reading is an important element of our writing that includes reading blurbs or preface when we are browsing through a bookstore or a library - bound books stacked one beside the other. Imagine reading the text on the spine of the books - Who Moved My Cheese Around the World in Eighty Days When Love Came Calling. Quite a line in itself!
With this, we bring you the third prompt from Terri.
Write a book spine haiku / senryu and as an example, Terri has shared one given below. You need not post a picture but may share the titles that you used to carve out your verse. Hope you have fun experimenting this!
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For easy reference, in case you need: Adding all July prompt threads here: https://www.trivenihaikai.in/post/haikusutradhar-01-july-2022 https://www.trivenihaikai.in/post/haikusutradhar-07-july-2022
the sea the sea
under something of a cloud ...
latitudes of longing
samir satam
Book Spine:
The Sea, The Sea by Iris Murdoch
Under Something of a Cloud by Dom Moraes
Latitudes of Longing by Shubhangi Swarup
lunatic wind
south carolina ghosts
doing the charleston
Lunatic Wind by William Price Fox
South Carolina Ghosts by Mary Roberts
Doing the Charleston by Frank B. Gilbreath
the beehive cluster
in grandfather's garden —
the closet
Book Spine:
The Beehive cluster, by Rosemary Pavey
In grandfather's garden, by Ruskin Bond
The closet, by Danielle Bobker
Which do you prefer?
till we have faces
night
&the city
Or:
till we have faces
tender
is the night
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"Till We Have Faces" by C.S. Lewis
"Night And The City" Gerald Kersh
"Tender Is The Night" by F. Scott Fitzgerald
the book of longings
a farewell to arms
The Book of Longings by Sue Monk Kidd
A Farewell to Arms by Ernest Hemingway
Any suggestions?