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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 24th January 2026 Guest poet: Keiko Izawa

Updated: Jan 31

haikaiTALKS: Japanese aesthetics – Miyabi|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Keiko Izawa

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 24th January 2026


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Special Guest Poet: Keiko Izawa

host: Srinivasa Sambangi


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree



haikaiTALKS  24th January 2026

 

Japanese aesthetics – Miyabi


Miyabi is one of the oldest traditional aesthetic ideals in Japan. The term

miyabi embodies the image of an ideal aristocratic culture. It represents

courtesy, language, expression, atmosphere, and emotions that are free from

coarseness and immaturity, all aimed at achieving the highest level of

elegance. In modern writing, it is typically translated as "elegance, refinement, or courtly elegance."


Yoshida Kenkō said that many people seem to enjoy only the full bloom of

cherry blossoms or the full moon, but that is not always the case. He

considered that cherry blossoms before they bloom and after they have fallen

are also elegant, and that yearning for the moon which cannot be seen due to

the rain, is equally elegant. He mentions that if you observe carefully, you can

find elegance in everything.


This week you are requested to write up to two haiku that express miyabi.

As usual, try to use kigo from the lists below. You can also use your local

season words that are not listed here.


Characteristics of Miyabi


  • graceful composure

  • graceful motion

  • gentle transitions

  • subtle refinement

  • polished delicacy

  • elegant restraint

  • soft luminosity

  • harmonious coloring

  • lightness without fragility

  • unforced beauty

  • courtly grace

  • tender emotional nuance


Samples:


雨帯て うごかぬ梅の にほひかな

ume obi te / ugokanu ume no / nioi kana


tinged with rain

the scent of plum blossoms

lingers


~ Nanasato


うまれたての 月上りけり 雪うさぎ

umaretate no / tsuki nobori keri / yukiusagi


climbing

the newborn moon

snow rabbit


~ author unknown


瞬きて 紫陽花のゐる 陽射しかな

mabataki te / ajisai no iru / hizashi kana


in the blink of an eye

sunlight glimmers

on the hydrangeas


~ Naito Yōkō



leaf by leaf

a snail’s trail

silvers the dusk


~ Marilyn Ashbaugh

haikuKATHA #47 2025


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We are repeating MIYABI once again, this week.

!! _kala


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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” Jane Reichhold:

920530f8.pdf


Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:


The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:


The World Kigo Database:


The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:



Thanks, Keiko! Another beautiful post. Thanks a lot.

I hope our poets take the challenge and create a haiku on these lines! Keenly looking ahead to this month.

Greatly indebted to you. And a million thanks for being with us and guiding us through your lessons.

                                                

Dear Members,

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well.

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala


283 Comments


Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Jan 30

30.01.2026

#1


moonlit balcony

the dragonfly motifs

in her silk saree


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
2 days ago
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A delicate and beautiful image Kalyanee.

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29/1/26


late winter rain

the pale curve of the moon

behind blossom buds


C.X. Turner, U.K.

(feedback welcome)

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
2 days ago
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Gorgeous Luci.

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29 Jan 2026

#2


morning mist

a lady bug lands on the 'O'

of the Thank You note


Leena Anandhi

India


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Beautiful, thank you Keiko❤️

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28 Jan 2026


morning breeze

granny's chair rocks a bit

with every snore


Leena Anandhi

India


Feedbacks welcome


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Thank you Keiko. The miyabi is still elusive! Will try....

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Jan 28

Post #2

28.1.26


deepening dark

I open the firefly jar

to let out the stars


Mona Bedi

India


Feedback appreciated:)

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Mona,

It’s a charming and imaginative ku, but I don’t sense miyabi here. The scene leans more toward fūga and poetic fantasy — the playful gesture of opening a firefly jar to “let out the stars” brings a bright, imaginative delight rather than the restrained, courtly elegance that miyabi prefers.

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