haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 18th October 2025

haikaiTALKS: Five Senses & Tanmatras|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

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Special Guest Poet: Lakshmi Iyer

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 18th October 2025

haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

Your Guest Poet for SEPTEMBER: Lakshmi Iyer

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Five Senses & Tanmatras

The Upanishads, along with broader Vedic and Hindu philosophical texts, describe the five Jnanendriyas, or cognitive senses: hearing (ear), touch (skin), sight (eye), taste (tongue), and smell (nose).

These senses are considered the primary means by which an individual perceives the external world and gains knowledge about it. 

These five senses are often linked to the elements and their corresponding tanmatras:

Sound is associated with the ear and the element of space.

Touch is linked to the skin and the element of air.

Form/Sight is attributed to the eye and the element of fire.

Taste is associated with the tongue and the element of water.

Smell is linked to the nose and the element of earth. 

We have come across many poems connected to the five senses. We shall take each one of them and weave our senses! The given poems are my earthly experiences, published and presented here. Thank you so much, Kala Ramesh and the entire editorial board, for giving me this opportunity to present this feature in haikaiTALKS.

I'm looking forward to reading your poems, as I have come to understand how each one of you thinks differently. 

18th October 2025

Beauty within Breath!

The inter weaving of senses and the nostalgic experiences of each one of you were amazing.  Sometimes, we need space and time to exhibit our breath, so here we go!! Let all the themes and prompts be generalized to just ... beauty within breath

scent of lemon grass

her finger traces

the Milky way

             K. Ramesh, Chennai, India 

a small tree of tender leaves 

her autumn years

        at last the touch

of pen to paper 

             Kala Ramesh, Chennai, India 

Modern Haiku, 56:3, August 2025

dark sunset

a shadow drops

off my notepad

             Lakshmi Iyer, India 

             Lucas's Lily Pad, 2019

Beauty within breath upholds the nuances of our bhava, tala and laya - we just need to keep pace with the energy around us.

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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

https://thehaikufoundation.org/omeka/files/original/7fb6654a1dfd1afef97369da920530f8.pdf

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

https://www.trivenihaikai.in/indian-saijiki

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

http://www.2hweb.net/haikai/renku/500ESWd.html

The World Kigo Database:

https://wkdkigodatabase03.blogspot.com/

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

https://yths.org/season-word-list/

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Thanks, Lakshmi. We are eagerly looking forward to how the next two months unfold. I love your examples.

Dear Members,

Waiting for your responses.

Please give your feedback on others' commentary and poems, too. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in a grand manner!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala