writeALONG! 30th May

Muskaan Ahuja
May 30, 2023
1 min read

A TUESDAY FEATURE

host: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer

guest editor: K. Ramesh

When we are in a particular location, we don't have to use the article 'a' or 'an' before the haiku.

For example, if i am in a railway station, I can say, 'railway station....' not 'a railway station...'

Share two haiku based on the technique mentioned above. And remember to enjoy the moment while you write...happy writing!

48 Comments

mona bedi

Jun 05, 2023

zen retreat

we meditate

on birdsong

Padma Rajeswari

Jun 01, 2023

ku#2

foreign land

I describe

pumpkin blossom fritters

Thanks for feedback.

K. Ramesh

Jun 04, 2023

Replying to

when they visit you in your hometown they will remember!

Kala Ramesh

May 31, 2023

Edited to:

fields guzzle the mud-dissolving rain - clouds clear

Is this L3 any better?

>>>>>>>.

fields guzzle

the mud-dissolving rain

his autobiography

K. Ramesh

Jun 04, 2023

Replying to

I can see an elderly author sitting on the porch watching the rain and writing his own story. The haiku evokes a sense of time and it makes me reflect too!

Kala Ramesh

May 31, 2023

missing my room

in my daughter's house ...

hermit crab

lakshmi iyer

Jun 01, 2023

Replying to

I liked this, very deep.

Muskaan Ahuja

May 31, 2023

Thanks a lot K. Ramesh for your guidance to the poets and allowing us to relish poems, now and then.

K. Ramesh

Jun 04, 2023

Replying to

Thank you Muskaan, I am actually learning a lot from the poems posted by the poets here!