writeALONG! 30th May
- Muskaan Ahuja
- May 30, 2023
- 1 min read
A TUESDAY FEATURE
host: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer
guest editor: K. Ramesh
When we are in a particular location, we don't have to use the article 'a' or 'an' before the haiku.
For example, if i am in a railway station, I can say, 'railway station....' not 'a railway station...'
Share two haiku based on the technique mentioned above. And remember to enjoy the moment while you write...happy writing!
#2
zen retreat
we meditate
on birdsong
ku#2
foreign land
I describe
pumpkin blossom fritters
Thanks for feedback.
Edited to:
fields guzzle the mud-dissolving rain - clouds clear
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Is this L3 any better?
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fields guzzle
the mud-dissolving rain
his autobiography
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missing my room
in my daughter's house ...
hermit crab
?
Thanks a lot K. Ramesh for your guidance to the poets and allowing us to relish poems, now and then.