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writeALONG! 30th May

A TUESDAY FEATURE

host: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer

guest editor: K. Ramesh


When we are in a particular location, we don't have to use the article 'a' or 'an' before the haiku.


For example, if i am in a railway station, I can say, 'railway station....' not 'a railway station...'


Share two haiku based on the technique mentioned above. And remember to enjoy the moment while you write...happy writing!

48 comentarios


mona bedi
mona bedi
05 jun 2023

#2


zen retreat

we meditate

on birdsong

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Padma  Rajeswari
Padma Rajeswari
01 jun 2023

ku#2


foreign land

I describe

pumpkin blossom fritters


Thanks for feedback.

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K. Ramesh
K. Ramesh
04 jun 2023
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when they visit you in your hometown they will remember!

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
31 may 2023

Edited to:


fields guzzle the mud-dissolving rain - clouds clear

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Is this L3 any better?

>>>>>>>.


fields guzzle

the mud-dissolving rain

his autobiography


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K. Ramesh
K. Ramesh
04 jun 2023
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I can see an elderly author sitting on the porch watching the rain and writing his own story. The haiku evokes a sense of time and it makes me reflect too!

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
31 may 2023

missing my room

in my daughter's house ...

hermit crab


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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
01 jun 2023
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I liked this, very deep.

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Muskaan Ahuja
Muskaan Ahuja
31 may 2023

Thanks a lot K. Ramesh for your guidance to the poets and allowing us to relish poems, now and then.

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K. Ramesh
K. Ramesh
04 jun 2023
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Thank you Muskaan, I am actually learning a lot from the poems posted by the poets here!

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