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writeALONG! 27 May

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh

guest editor: Lorraine Haig


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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‘Finally will it not be enough,

after much living, after

much love, after much dying

of those you have loved,

to sit on the porch near sundown

with your eyes simply open,

watching the wind shape the clouds

into the shapes of clouds’?



From A Timbered Choir: The Sabbath Poems 1979-1997 (1999) by American writer Wendell Berry.



I sourced this from an email to me. ‘Cloud-a-Day’ from The Cloud Appreciation Society.



What inspiration do you find here to craft your own haiku?


140 Comments


Post 1


cloud stories

how my life

changes daily


Adelaide B. Shaw

USA

comments welcomed

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#2 - 31/05/25


black clouds sashay the field of daisies


Kanjini Devi, NZ

feedback welcome

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Thank you, Mohua.

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Haiku#1


Turner's apprentice

loading a fox-hair brush

with clouds and sky


Ron C. Moss

Tasmania, Australia

Comments Welcomed


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Thank you Modua


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#1 - 30/05/25


meadow clouds

baby goats take turns

to faint


Kanjini Devi, NZ

feedback welcome


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fainting_goat

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1FkiQvUrIc

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Thank you, Sathya.

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Mohua
Mohua
May 29

#2


Revised (Many thanks to Alan)


mom and i

only talk about the weather

tangled branches


Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated.


Original


tangled branches...

mom and i talk

about the weather


Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated.

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Mohua
Mohua
May 30
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Many thanks Alan for taking out time. I really appreciate it and will ponder over it some more.

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