writeALONG! 27 May
- Padma Rajeswari 
- May 27
- 1 min read
A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh
guest editor: Lorraine Haig
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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‘Finally will it not be enough,
after much living, after
much love, after much dying
of those you have loved,
to sit on the porch near sundown
with your eyes simply open,
watching the wind shape the clouds
into the shapes of clouds’?
From A Timbered Choir: The Sabbath Poems 1979-1997 (1999) by American writer Wendell Berry.
I sourced this from an email to me. ‘Cloud-a-Day’ from The Cloud Appreciation Society.
What inspiration do you find here to craft your own haiku?

Post 1
cloud stories
how my life
changes daily
Adelaide B. Shaw
USA
comments welcomed
#2 - 31/05/25
black clouds sashay the field of daisies
Kanjini Devi, NZ
feedback welcome
Haiku#1
Turner's apprentice
loading a fox-hair brush
with clouds and sky
Ron C. Moss
Tasmania, Australia
Comments Welcomed
#1 - 30/05/25
meadow clouds
baby goats take turns
to faint
Kanjini Devi, NZ
feedback welcome
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fainting_goat
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1FkiQvUrIc
#2
Revised (Many thanks to Alan)
mom and i
only talk about the weather
tangled branches
Mohua Maulik, India
Feedback appreciated.
Original
tangled branches...
mom and i talk
about the weather
Mohua Maulik, India
Feedback appreciated.