A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer
guest editor: Ajaya Mahala
My Haiku Style
Hello guys! Movement is essence of life.
Kidnappers and bank robbers are interesting classes of people for whom accurate movement is extremely crucial. They may not be knowing the approach road to the target but they know very well the escape routes beforehand. An eloper has traits of both!
night of elopement
the escort moon avoids the highways
--- Ajaya Mahala
Distance trees slow walk in the far meadows when seen from a running train; rain-bearing clouds penetrate far deep into the continent at the onset of monsoon. Here is an attempt to disrobe something!
side waves
a power boat unzips
a lagoon
--- Ajaya Mahala
Does the Time also move ? How the day changes to night?
mosquito wings. . .
the colour of evening
so thin
--- Ajaya Mahala
Please paint these hours of transition with your own words of movement and share here.
All my favourite ones of yours, Ajaya.
Nice poems with different themes of movement.
leaf wind
only I remain
behind
Publication Credit:
Stardust Haiku, Issue 76, April 2023
27.04.2023
I love all of your haiku, Ajaya. But especially side waves!
polka dot dress
the breeze captures
his attention
Feedback Appreciated
#1, I would like to take this poem to submit elsewhere. Thank you!
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a skeleton leaf the sun lights a vibgyor
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feedback please
Ajaya, such good collection of poems. Thank you!