writeALONG! 20 May
- Padma Rajeswari
- May 20
- 1 min read
A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh
guest editor: Lorraine Haig
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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I wait
and wait
for things to happen ...
a raven
perched on a lamppost
-Kala Ramesh
What an interesting tanka. The day slips along and nothing is happening except for a raven.
Perhaps all is about to change as ravens can represent both good and bad omens.
The poet is yet to find out exactly how the day will progress.
What birds do you see or hear throughout the day? Do you have a favourite?
Write a haiku about birds.
#1
sudden hailstorm –
beside the broken eggs
a lone mynah
Milan Rajkumar
India
Feedback Welcome
#2
25 May
cattle egret
in the fish market
wading through contenders
Leena Anandhi, India
Feedback welcome
#2
a blue wren
shimmies on the birdbath
floating leaves
Lorraine Haig, Aust.
Feedback welcome.
haiku#1
hard-won-happiness
a pair of black swans
bring down the night
Ron C. Moss
Tasmania, Australia
Comments Welcomed
#2
stolen biscuit
a crow flaps out of leaves
to share the last crumb
Mohua Maulik, India
Feedback appreciated.