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writeALONG! 20 May

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh

guest editor: Lorraine Haig


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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I wait

and wait

for things to happen ...

a raven

perched on a lamppost



-Kala Ramesh

 

What an interesting tanka. The day slips along and nothing is happening except for a raven.

Perhaps all is about to change as ravens can represent both good and bad omens.

The poet is yet to find out exactly how the day will progress.


What birds do you see or hear throughout the day? Do you have a favourite?

Write a haiku about birds.

199 comentários


Milan Rajkumar
Milan Rajkumar
26 de mai.

#1


sudden hailstorm –

beside the broken eggs

a lone mynah


Milan Rajkumar

India


Feedback Welcome


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Milan Rajkumar
Milan Rajkumar
28 de mai.
Respondendo a

Thank you Mohua! ❤️👍

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Leena Anandhi
Leena Anandhi
25 de mai.

#2

25 May


cattle egret

in the fish market

wading through contenders


Leena Anandhi, India

Feedback welcome


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Kanjini Devi
Kanjini Devi
27 de mai.
Respondendo a

A striking imaage, Leena. There does not appear to be a kire?


cattle egret

in the fish market

wading through contenders


How about


a cattle egret

wading through contenders

fish market


Or


a cattle egret

culling contenders

fish market

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Lorraine Haig
25 de mai.

#2


a blue wren

shimmies on the birdbath

floating leaves


Lorraine Haig, Aust.

Feedback welcome.

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Kanjini Devi
Kanjini Devi
27 de mai.
Respondendo a

Love the image of 'shimmies' and 'floating leaves'.

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Ron C. Moss
Ron C. Moss
23 de mai.

haiku#1


hard-won-happiness

a pair of black swans

bring down the night


Ron C. Moss

Tasmania, Australia

Comments Welcomed


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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
24 de mai.
Respondendo a

I love seeing black swans, how lovely.

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Mohua
Mohua
23 de mai.

#2


stolen biscuit

a crow flaps out of leaves

to share the last crumb


Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated.

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Mohua
Mohua
24 de mai.
Respondendo a

I was lucky enough to see it! It dived in between the leaves with it booty and gobbled it up right under my nose, while the mate sat on a higher open branch busy preening. At last it emerged and stuck his (i am presuming he) into her beak. Then they both cleaned their beaks on the branches. It was a very warm and sweet scene.

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