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writeALONG! 20 December

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A TUESDAY FEATURE

host: Muskaan Ahuja

guest editor: Richa Sharma


Diary Writing


Taneda Shoichi (1882-1940) admired for his non-traditional haiku, had a tragic life that is responsible for the undoubted literary worth of his works today.

A few things about him will always linger in my contemplation. First, a deep attachment to his mother is very poignant. His book of haiku Somokuto was dedicated “to my mother / who hastened to her death when young.” Second, as we all know, he found enlightenment in daily life. Third, his profound love for haiku was aided by walking trips.


And fourth, he used to frequently record the circumstances that led to the composition of a particular poem or group of poems in his diaries and letters. Here is one excerpt from Grass and Tree Cairn:


In 1927 and 1928 I drifted aimlessly, along the San’yo Road, along the San’in Road, and in Shikoku and Kyushu.


Alone being eaten up by mosquitoes

Hitori de ka ni kuwareteiru


Some of my favourite haiku by Santoka:



wobbly on my feet

the good taste

of water




I go on walking

higan lilies

go on blooming*



* Higanbana (equinox flower), also called manjushage, is a wild lily that blooms around the autumn equinox.


Over the next week, I request you to compose short-form poems from your diary entries and scribbles. If you haven't written, let's begin today. Don't worry about imperfections. Over time and with edits, a poem will be clear as a mirror. Please remember, there will be a difference between translation and writing English-language haiku.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2022年12月28日

filter coffee —

sunbird tweets

the morning news

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2022年12月28日

first time rangoli . . .

a kaleidoscope

of autumn colours


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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2022年12月28日

no GPS along

the village cows walk

home safe and sound

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Richa Sharma
Richa Sharma
2022年12月28日
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Beautiful and creative work, Lakshmi. Thank you for sharing 🙏❤️

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2022年12月23日

fields of white trillium butterflies in flight


riding on predawn shades of a whistling thrush's song


feedback most appreciated

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2022年12月23日
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yeah :))))))

Thank you so much, Richa

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2022年12月21日

facing the mirror inside out a champa blossom


does this work?

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2022年12月22日
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champa blossoming my face in the mirror inside out


champa in the mirror touching my face inside out


I love both these variations. You are too good.

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