A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K. Ramesh
guest editor: Anju Kishore
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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"Reflect on the world that you carry within yourself. It might be recollections of your childhood or yearning for your own future. Just be sure that you observe carefully what wells up within you and place that above everything that you notice around you. Your innermost happening is worth all your love. You must somehow work on that."
--- Letters to a Young Poet, Rainer Maria Rilke
Let's follow this famous piece of advice. Let's sink deep into ourselves for a while to feel what simmers inside, and allow it to “well up”, its poetry to consume us. This week, we shall revel in such haiku.
#2 7-27-24
arriving home
my mom waves
from the gingko branch
Jennifer Gurney, US
#1 7-24-24
that instant
when new knowledge
clicks
Jennifer Gurney, US
#1
Revised, thanks to the possibilities shared by Alan.
no path back home
a sakura petal detaches
from the branch
Namratha Varadharajan, India
Version1:
sakura detaches
from branch
no path back home
Namratha Varadharajan, India
feedback welcome
#2 21/07
Revision 1 by Alan 🌺
ballet ambition
the butterfly dance
resides within me
Fatma Zohra Habis/ Algeria
The Original
party
try the butterfly steps
dancing with wings
feedback welcome🌺🌹
#1, 21/7
kite strings the relationships forgotten in passing clouds
Lakshmi Iyer, India
Feedback please