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writeALONG 15 July 2025

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh

guest editor: Kanjini Devi


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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Māori gods, or atua, are supernatural beings that represent aspects of the natural world and the human experience.  Their stories explain the origins of the universe, people, and natural phenomena from a Māori worldview.  This week, we look for inspiration from Tangaroa, god of the sea, rivers, lakes and waterways. He rules over all the creatures that live in the oceans.


Do you find the ocean inspiring?  Perhaps a tad intimidating?  Most people enjoy going to the beach, especially during summer.  There is so much life in and around the ocean regardless of the season.

 

The prompt for your haiku/senryu this week is ocean or any of the other aspects presided over by Tangaroa.  Here are some examples:-

 

 

the sea darkens

a wild duck’s call

faintly white

 

Basho (tr. Makoto Ueda)

 

 

mother of teens

summer sea calmer

than me

 

Vandana Parashar

 

 

rock

paper

scissors

a wave takes all

 

Jan Stretch

 

Write haiku/senryu around ocean or any of the other aspects presided over by Tangaroa. 

215 Comments


#1 7-21-25


sand between my toes

heat rippling off my body

as I step into the cold


Jennifer Gurney, US

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#2

19th July 2025


a holy dip

at the confluence

for a cleaner me


-Vaishnavi Ramaswamy, India

(Feedback Welcome)

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Thank you Kanjini!

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#2, 17/07


The Bhagirathi —

Goddesses take leave

amidst ululation


Lakshmi Iyer, India

Feedback welcome

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salt wind

the soft flutter

of gull wings


#2 Nitu Yumnam, UAE

Feedback welcome.

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I agree with Marilyn, Nitu

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Jul 17

Post #2

17.7.25


paper boats bounce

on a rivulet's laughter

first rain


Mona Bedi

India


Feedback appreciated:)

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Jul 18
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Thanks!

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