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writeALONG! 12 March

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer

guest editor: Lakshmi Iyer


Please note: 


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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the rains came

and from that day on

continued

throughout a lifetime 

of floods and bridges

                                      

--- an’ya

                      


Read the simple story evolving right from the very first line and the gradual deeper intensity towards the last line with the support system. Sometimes it is very difficult to write a simple poem.


Pick one season and evolve your storyline with a haiku/senryu.


185 Comments


Post 1


spring rain -

the sunlight catches

the thrushes call


Feedback welcome

23.3.24

Katherine E Winnick

Brighton UK

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Mar 25, 2024
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Nice!

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Jharna Sanyal
Jharna Sanyal
Mar 22, 2024

Post 1#23.3.24


wayside fern

turn white in fear

howling wind


Jharna Sanyal

Kolkata, India


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marilyn ashbaugh
marilyn ashbaugh
Mar 17, 2024

17/3/24. 2nd post


Thank you, Lev! 🕸️


casual reading 

a spider lingers

on Issa


Marilyn Ashbaugh, USA

feedback welcome

casual reading 

a spider lingers

on an Issa poem






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Love the second one

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Milan Rajkumar
Milan Rajkumar
Mar 17, 2024

#1

Edited: 18/03/2024


autumn sunset –

the elongated shadow

of an angler


Milan Rajkumar

India


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autumn sunset –

the elongated shadow

of a fisherman


Milan Rajkumar

India


Feedback welcome

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Milan Rajkumar
Milan Rajkumar
Mar 18, 2024
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Thank you too Lakshmi.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Mar 16, 2024

storm-lashed coconut trees

all of them 

show their back 


Kala Ramesh India


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Feedback most welcome.


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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Mar 17, 2024
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Thank you so much, Milan

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