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A TUESDAY FEATURE

host: Muskaan Ahuja

guest editor: Srinivasa Rao


SMILE


"A smile is a curve that sets everything straight."

--- Phyllis Diller


Not always!!!

Perhaps the smile is the most powerful tool to change the status quo. I have carefully chosen the word status quo. It does not always bring a positive change. Imagine what happens when you smile at a person who is in deep trouble.


You do not need to be a body language expert to determine if the smile of a person is genuine or sarcastic. You can judge based on the curvature the smile makes.


This week explore more into types of smiles, when and when not to smile and write a

haiku/senryu/tanka on anything connected to smile.



henpecked

so young

by smile lines


..........................


class reunion

Mona Lisa's smile

still yes or no



--- Srinivasa Rao


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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Nov 26, 2022

Thanks Srinivas for the lovely 'write along' and sorry for the delay.

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Srinivas Sambangi
Srinivas Sambangi
Nov 26, 2022
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Late or no late....you are always there which is more important😊

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Nov 26, 2022

#3

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in the ashram

the soft smile of the dog

follows me

.

feedback, is this okay?

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Nov 27, 2022
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Can you suggest anything out of this?

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Nov 26, 2022

#2

.

colgate smile

father shows off

his dentures

.

feedback

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Nov 26, 2022

#1

.

smiley emoticons

wonder which to pick

for that bore

.

feedback


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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Nov 27, 2022
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Thanks!

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lindalee004
lindalee004
Nov 24, 2022

her beautiful smile

tears no one has seen

the mirror knows


Critiques welcome!


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RS
RS
Nov 26, 2022
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Lovely, Linda :)

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