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triveni spotlight: 9th May 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Bryan Rickert



trespassing

a rusty barbed wire

catches my poem




Marilyn Ashbaugh

Failed Haiku. 8.84


This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Bryan.

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Thank you, Bryan for this one.

I think the last word is so surprising that it lifts the haiku out of the ordinary.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
2023. máj. 09.

Lovely!

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Barbara  Olmtak
Barbara Olmtak
2023. máj. 09.

Congratulations Marilyn🌹

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
2023. máj. 09.

Fantastic! I love this!

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