triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY hosts: Anju Kishore and Mohua Maulik GUEST EDITOR: Dipankar Dasgupta
7th March 2025
triveni spotlight March 2025
an appointment
to make an appointment
falling leaves
Carolyn Hall
Mariposa 48, Spring Summer 2023
Theme: Inevitability
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I read a lot of haiku and admit that I can’t connect to everything I read. Some of the poems appeal to me, some don’t. And there are some that I can’t quite grasp and keep coming back to.
The famous George Swede once wrote to me:
Keep searching for your own voice. We all begin by imitating poets we admire and then gradually find our own style.
I have followed his advice. I am yet to find my style, but I think I know now what I am after.
Keeping this in mind, the only criterion I employed in my selection can be called Excellence. There is no other unique theme for the poems. However, should anyone be looking for more concrete themes, I have assigned to each poem, a theme of its own. These are indicated at the end of the poems. It’s best that I leave it to the readers to decide if they are appropriate. For example, the theme for one of Kala Ramesh’s poems is CLASSIC. For me, classic stands for old gold as in Jane Reichhold.
I have interpretations for the other themes as well. In all cases though, the poems are more important than the theme titles. What matters is that each one is excellent in my opinion.
Dipankar Dasgupta
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Thank you for being our next guest editor, Dipankar. An interesting March this promises to be.
_()_ triveni spotlight team
falling leaves - completes the poem. falling leaves is about decay and death, and it adds so much to Ls 1 & 2. You wonder if this person got his appointment on time? Whether it was successful.
an appointment
to make an appointment
falling leaves
Carolyn Hall
Good choice and good haiku.
There are those who are trapped in the workings of human-made time -abiding by it, cursing it, fighting it, getting frustrated by it. And then there are those who go with the flow of nature's time.
Yes!! It goes on!