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triveni spotlight: 5 december

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: K. Ramesh


just enough time

to see the falling rain …

hospital window


Muskaan Ahuja

THF Haiku Windows, May 9, 2018




Note by the Editor


​Sometimes when we as haiku poets compose haiku there is a certain joy or happiness that we would experience after composing a haiku. The happiness could be due to various factors:

for example being available to register a moment and write a haiku or it could be because we found the right words and also a certain effortlessness involved in composing that haiku! This feeling is the gift we get for the haiku we have composed, and it keeps as going as a haiku poet! For the December Spotlight I wanted haijins to share such haiku!


-- K. Ramesh

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Rupa Anand
Rupa Anand
06 dic 2022

This is so good. Wish I could write like this …..

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Oh, this touches me on so many levels, each deeper than the last. Thank you, Muskaan for writing it and Kala for sharing it.

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K. Ramesh
K. Ramesh
05 dic 2022

This haiku is like a scene in a Japanese movie!

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Muskaan Ahuja
Muskaan Ahuja
05 dic 2022
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Whoa!!

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
05 dic 2022

Nicely worded, Muskaan

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Muskaan Ahuja
Muskaan Ahuja
05 dic 2022
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Thanks a lot, Kala!

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
05 dic 2022

Lovely!! Actually we hardly have time in a hospital... but i liked the way line one is framed.

'just enough time'

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Muskaan Ahuja
Muskaan Ahuja
05 dic 2022
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Thankyou!

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