triveni spotlight
A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY!
hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh
GUEST EDITOR: K. Ramesh
just enough time
to see the falling rain …
hospital window
Muskaan Ahuja
THF Haiku Windows, May 9, 2018
Note by the Editor
Sometimes when we as haiku poets compose haiku there is a certain joy or happiness that we would experience after composing a haiku. The happiness could be due to various factors:
for example being available to register a moment and write a haiku or it could be because we found the right words and also a certain effortlessness involved in composing that haiku! This feeling is the gift we get for the haiku we have composed, and it keeps as going as a haiku poet! For the December Spotlight I wanted haijins to share such haiku!
-- K. Ramesh
This is so good. Wish I could write like this …..
Oh, this touches me on so many levels, each deeper than the last. Thank you, Muskaan for writing it and Kala for sharing it.
This haiku is like a scene in a Japanese movie!
Nicely worded, Muskaan
Lovely!! Actually we hardly have time in a hospital... but i liked the way line one is framed.
'just enough time'
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