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triveni spotlight : 31 may

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh guest editor: Jenny Ward Angyal

theme: Earthsongs



colors of dawn

shimmering on the lake . . .

out of darkness

the answers to questions

I never knew to ask


Rebecca Drouilhet

Ripples in the Sand, Tanka Society of America Members’ Anthology, 2016






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Debbie Strange
Debbie Strange
31 maj 2022


Polub

deep waves

at my knees

this feeling

of being overcome

with her loss

Polub

lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
31 maj 2022

I really don't remember reading this poem, but the puzzle remains. I had written a tanka on the same lines.

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moonlight

wavering on the lake ...

stuck midway

questions i never thought

would be asked of me

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the above is just a scribbling in my diary and i don't know whether it will make any sense to the readers or so on. But the fact remains that thoughts do proclaim to be on the same wavelength.

Polub
lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
01 cze 2022
Odpowiada osobie:

Thank you!

Polub
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