triveni spotlight
A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY!
hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh
GUEST EDITOR: K. Ramesh
backyard swing ...
the rhythm of her feet
pushing the ground
Ashish Narain
Under the Basho 2022
Note by the Editor
Sometimes when we as haiku poets compose haiku there is a certain joy or happiness that we would experience after composing a haiku. The happiness could be due to various factors:
for example, being available to register a moment and write a haiku or it could be because we found the right words and also a certain effortlessness involved in composing that haiku! This feeling is the gift we get for the haiku we have composed, and it keeps as going as a haiku poet! For the December Spotlight I wanted haijins to share such haiku!
-- K. Ramesh
I love the joy in this haiku!
Would really like to have Ashish's thoughts too!!
Beautifully captured.
If its allowed to post here..an old one
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after we swing
the swing swings on its own
autumn pause
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Feedback welcome
sea breeze rustle of palm fronds in rice stew
Beautiful! loved it