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triveni spotlight : 29 april

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triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh guest editor: Sanjuktaa Asopa



into the spring mist

the mallard pair

and the mallards to come


--Vincent Tripi


(Tinywords, March 2017)


Editor's Note: The theme is ' The Ephemeral'. My endeavour here is to feature the poems that portray the ephemerality of things and emotions.


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Richa Sharma
Richa Sharma
May 01, 2022

Love this ❤️

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Robert Kingston
Apr 30, 2022

party night

an aura of mother

in the magic box


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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Apr 29, 2022

into the spring mist

the mallard pair

and the mallards to come


--Vincent Tripi There's a freshness here ... That 'into' has made all the difference. A typical ELH - we would have written: spring mist ...

the mallard pair

and the mallards to come


Isn't it? Vincent's verse, is a sentence ku - something we write in renku. I still like Vincent's version. All of us at some point need a change and our minds accept.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Apr 30, 2022
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Yes, such a big difference!

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Pamela A Babusci
Apr 29, 2022

vincent was a good friend of mine for many, many years.

he was a brilliant haiku poet. he is missed by me everyday.

i have his photo on my refrig. so, i can see him daily.


love & miss you vincenzo! pamela

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Apr 30, 2022
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Thank you to say more about Vincent. Could you share any poems of his? Thank you.

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Robert Kingston
Apr 29, 2022

Lovely poem.

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