triveni spotlight : 29 april
- Kala Ramesh
- Apr 29, 2022
- 1 min read
triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh guest editor: Sanjuktaa Asopa
into the spring mist
the mallard pair
and the mallards to come
--Vincent Tripi
(Tinywords, March 2017)
Editor's Note: The theme is ' The Ephemeral'. My endeavour here is to feature the poems that portray the ephemerality of things and emotions.
Love this ❤️
party night
an aura of mother
in the magic box
into the spring mist
the mallard pair
and the mallards to come
--Vincent Tripi There's a freshness here ... That 'into' has made all the difference. A typical ELH - we would have written: spring mist ...
the mallard pair
and the mallards to come
Isn't it? Vincent's verse, is a sentence ku - something we write in renku. I still like Vincent's version. All of us at some point need a change and our minds accept.
vincent was a good friend of mine for many, many years.
he was a brilliant haiku poet. he is missed by me everyday.
i have his photo on my refrig. so, i can see him daily.
love & miss you vincenzo! pamela
Lovely poem.