triveni spotlight: 27th May 2023
- Kala Ramesh
- May 27, 2023
- 1 min read
triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Bryan Rickert
tangled fishing net
slowly unraveling
my dad’s past
Louise Hopewell
Failed Haiku 7.80
This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Bryan.
This is very nice. Memories are tangled indeed - and sometimes you regret disentangling them.
Too good!! Loved the 'slowly unraveling'.
L1 resonates through the whole poem. Well done
This is fabulous!
I appreciate the sentimentality in this poem. ❤️