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Writer's pictureKala Ramesh

triveni spotlight: 27th July 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Kala Ramesh and Vidya Shankar GUEST EDITOR: Nandita Jain Mahajan, July 2023


What a strange thing!

to be alive

beneath cherry blossoms.



not just a trail a trail altogether wild with blackberries!




Thank you for giving me an opportunity to present my selection. Though the task of selecting haiku for Triveni Spotlight was very difficult, I found it very rewarding. I spent several hours going through poems available in the public domain and those from books in my personal collection. I read and re-read, shortlisted again and again paring down the list till I could do no more. It was a sheer joy to read such fantastic works - my heart is full ... so happy.

I tried to keep the poems different from what other guest editors had selected earlier. However, there is bound to be some repetition. I found myself leaning towards old Japanese masters like Basho, Issa, Shiki, and Ryokan but equally drawn to women poets like Chiyo-ni and Rengetsu. The simplicity, charm, and timeless quality is what pull me to their haiku. What a picture they paint! And, the space between what is said and what is unsaid. So many different interpretations which helped me connect to these poems.

Amongst the contemporary poets, I found myself opting for those that tugged at my heart. The poems span longing, sadness, hopelessness, hope, love, and gentleness. These are those that I could read over and over again, especially at dusk, when my mind is quiet and at peace. And then, something interesting happened. I realised that I could pair the masters with the contemporary - similar thoughts and subjects but different treatment. I hope you enjoy this selection. Nandita Jain Mahajan


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What a unique and refreshing way of handling this month's triveni spotlight selections! Watch out for this space, every alternate day, dear readers, you are in for a real treat! Thank you, Nandita. We are waiting to see the month unfold. _()_

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Arvinder Kaur
Arvinder Kaur
Jul 28, 2023

Beautiful pair ! loved it.

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sanjuktaa
Jul 27, 2023

Two gorgeous poems1 Esp the trail wild with blackberries1 Ooh!!

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Thank you for your comments. What do you think of the exclamation in each? I found them very powerful and evocative.

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Oh yes!! So lovely… took me back to our workshop 😍

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Vidya Shankar
Vidya Shankar
Jul 27, 2023

This is such a fantastic pair. The joy that one gets from Nature, so vividly expressed in both poems!

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Mallika Chari
Mallika Chari
Jul 27, 2023

Nature admired in this pair. Again a Lovely pairing

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