triveni spotlight
A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY!
hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh
GUEST EDITOR: K. Ramesh
unfenced:
songs from
the tea garden
Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
Issa’s Untidy Hut August 2014
Note by the Editor
Sometimes when we as haiku poets compose haiku there is a certain joy or happiness that we would experience after composing a haiku. The happiness could be due to various factors:
for example being available to register a moment and write a haiku or it could be because we found the right words and also a certain effortlessness involved in composing that haiku! This feeling is the gift we get for the haiku we have composed, and it keeps as going as a haiku poet! For the December Spotlight I wanted haijins to share such haiku!
-- K. Ramesh
Lovely one from Raamesh!
Loved this ku! The colon after unfenced is especially nice. To me unfenced: denotes spontaneity and happiness. This ku, is indeed evocative. Thank You for sharing.
A beautiful haiku. So evocative.