triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Kala Ramesh and Vidya Shankar GUEST EDITOR: Shreya Narang & Samir Satam 21st September 2023
sitar crescendo skyward rising of a lark
Gautam Nadkarni A Hundred Gourds 4.4
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Thank you for being our next guest editors Shreya and Samir We are waiting to see the month unfold. _()_
Liked this whichever way we read, coming back to the same.
Variation 1:
a lark rising skyward sitar crescendo
The variation has one less syllable, while "rising skyward" continues to act as a hinge, swinging from "a lark rising skyward" to "rising skyward sitar crescendo."
Variation 2:
crescendo
sitar
skyward
rising
lark
a
The format reflects "rising."