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triveni spotlight: 21st september 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Kala Ramesh and Vidya Shankar GUEST EDITOR: Shreya Narang & Samir Satam 21st September 2023



sitar crescendo skyward rising of a lark

Gautam Nadkarni A Hundred Gourds 4.4


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Thank you for being our next guest editors Shreya and Samir We are waiting to see the month unfold. _()_

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Sep 21, 2023

Liked this whichever way we read, coming back to the same.

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Sep 20, 2023

Variation 1:


a lark rising skyward sitar crescendo


The variation has one less syllable, while "rising skyward" continues to act as a hinge, swinging from "a lark rising skyward" to "rising skyward sitar crescendo."


Variation 2:


crescendo

sitar

skyward

rising

lark

a


The format reflects "rising."

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