triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Ashish Narain
group photo
one of us looking
at a spring cloud
Akari Fujii tr. by Fay Aoyagi
In Blue Willow Haiku World (by Fay Aoyagi). March 3, 2023
This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Ashish.
Superb poem!
Good one!
so simple with a touch of humor, and yet leads one to think about the necessity of being different for the individual (to enjoy the beauty of a passing cloud) and the difficulty this causes the group (breaks conformity and perhaps spoils the picture?). The power of haiku- to say without saying!
Nice one
Really liked this. So every day like. So utterly ordinary. And yet …