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triveni spotlight: 17th May 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Bryan Rickert


I slept with your watch

under my pillow last night

a tiny heartbeat


Penny Lowery

Failed Haiku 7.81



This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Bryan.

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Disha Upadhyay
Disha Upadhyay
May 18, 2023

Deeply affecting ku, pierced my heart...it has been 5 years, but I don't have the courage to change the cell of my father's watch.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
May 17, 2023

Strangely whenever I sleep in my in laws room I feel them around! Lovely poem

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
May 17, 2023

Beautiful!!

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Agree, heartbreaking.


I had a somewhat similar experience with the watch of my great grandfather. I never met him but when I wound the watch it did feel like a tiny, comforting heartbeat.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
May 17, 2023
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Must have been, Linda. I can just imagine.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
May 16, 2023

This is heartbreaking, Bryan.

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