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triveni spotlight : 15 may

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh guest editor: Jenny Ward Angyal

theme: Earthsongs



allowing

myself to be seen

by a doe and her fawn

the space between us

becomes a poem


—Marilyn Hazelton

A Thousand Voices, Tanka Society of America Members’ Anthology, 2019





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Debbie Strange
Debbie Strange
2022년 5월 31일


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Daipayan  Nair
Daipayan Nair
2022년 5월 16일

The imagery here is so beautiful! The "space between us" makes for the fulcrum of this piece!

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2022년 5월 16일

allowing

myself to be seen

by a doe and her fawn

the space between us

becomes a poem


—Marilyn Hazelton


Her lower verse is excellent. Very nicely done.

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
2022년 5월 15일

Fantastic!

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2022년 5월 15일

Loved L4

'the space between us'

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