triveni spotlight : 15 may
- tejisethi13
- May 15, 2022
- 1 min read
triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh guest editor: Jenny Ward Angyal
theme: Earthsongs
allowing
myself to be seen
by a doe and her fawn
the space between us
becomes a poem
—Marilyn Hazelton
A Thousand Voices, Tanka Society of America Members’ Anthology, 2019
The imagery here is so beautiful! The "space between us" makes for the fulcrum of this piece!
allowing
myself to be seen
by a doe and her fawn
the space between us
becomes a poem
—Marilyn Hazelton
Her lower verse is excellent. Very nicely done.
Fantastic!
Loved L4
'the space between us'