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triveni spotlight: 13th April 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Ashish Narain



sunset

the fruit vendor

adjusts the lightbulb


Richa Sharma

Presence, Issue 70



This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Ashish.

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Lovely and layered!


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Richa Sharma
Richa Sharma
Apr 13, 2023
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Thank you, Sanjuktaa. Happy you liked the ku.

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I like the mood this creates. One often sees a change-of-season poem and this haiku marks the passage of day to night with the concrete use of the lightbulb the fruit vendor uses to keep his stand open after the close of day. It implies for me that the fruit vendor works long hours, and that business goes on, perhaps well into the night.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Apr 15, 2023
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How lovely to see you here, Rebecca,

_()_

And what a beautiful comment.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Apr 13, 2023

Love this, Richa and Ashish.

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Richa Sharma
Richa Sharma
Apr 13, 2023
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Thank you, Kala🙏🌺

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Ashish Narain
Ashish Narain
Apr 13, 2023

There is such a strong feeling of tiredness, and slowing down in the ku. It demonstrates the power of showing not telling. :)

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Richa Sharma
Richa Sharma
Apr 13, 2023
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Thank you, Ashish.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Apr 13, 2023

A nice observation leading g to an ace ku!

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Richa Sharma
Richa Sharma
Apr 13, 2023
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Thank you, Mona.

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