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triveni spotlight: 11th May 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Bryan Rickert



night shifts a mouse in the wall of my mind



Jonathan Roman

Failed Haiku. 7.84


This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Bryan.

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RS
RS
May 14, 2023

Love this! Thank you for sharing!

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
May 11, 2023

Good one, Bryan. So many ways of playing around with the image.

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So many ways to read this. The word 'shifts' can be read as a verb or perhaps it's someone on night shifts. It's wonderful to play around with.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
May 11, 2023
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I love it too. Good one.

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