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between Heaven and Earth
begin to fall
a drop, or two,
of winter rain
Takahama Kyoshi tr. by Susumu Takiguchi
In Susumu Takiguchi. 2019. One Hundred Haijin After Shiki.
World Haiku Review 2019
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between Heaven and Earth
begin to fall
a drop, or two,
of winter rain
each time I read it, I feel it needs to be: begins to fall
Or is it - heaven and earth 'begin' to fall.
Then 'between' shouldn't be there on L1, isn't it? between Heaven and Earth
a drop, or two, of winter rain
begin to fall
This makes sense to me, I could be completely wrong.