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thinkALONG, 19 May 2026

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Padma Rajeswari, K. Ramesh

guest editor: Padma Priya


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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family album

mother’s mischievous smile 

I never knew 

 

-       Padma Rajeswari

 

 

This haiku by Padma Rajeswari is very relatable and thought-provoking. We always think that we know everything about our family members. Especially about our parents. All children forget that their parents were also children once—innocent and naughty, just like them. It is a pleasant surprise to them when they see that side of their parents in old family albums. The haiku is tender in its presentation. A child is looking at her/his mother's childhood photo and is surprised to see her mischievous smile in it. The child's surprise is endearing and very relatable. The narrator does not say anything more than that. The space that opens up in the poem for the reader is immense.


What makes the child feel that she 'never knew' her mother smiled like that? Did her mother never smile like that again? If so, where and why did that 'mischievous smile' go away? Is it replaced by another kind of smile? Does the child want that smile back? Can the mother smile like that again? Does the mother miss it? Though it appears to be a light-hearted poem, it carries more weight than the apparent simplicity in it. 


Write a haiku about a tender moment with your parents, or any family member, that tugs at your heart—a simple moment.

 

Poems outside the prompt are welcome too.

 

7 Comments


Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
19 minutes ago

#1

old spice your presence fading into night

Alfred Booth

Lyon, France


(The ku by Ron Moss made me remember my father — a detail long forgotten.)

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Robert Kingston
20 minutes ago

#1


my hands in dad’s shaping a piece of wood

Robert Kingston, UK

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Sathya Venkatesh
Sathya Venkatesh
2 hours ago

#1 graduation day—

his hands on my shoulders

for a selfie Sathya Venkatesh, India

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Sathya Venkatesh
Sathya Venkatesh
2 hours ago

Another stunning haiku and commentary Padma Priya. Thank you so much.

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Ron C. Moss
Ron C. Moss
2 hours ago

Haiku#1


trying on dad's felt hat scent of Old Spice

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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
18 minutes ago
Replying to

Ron,

Your poem made me remember my own father. Thank you.

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