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THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 3rd August 2023 Lorraine A Padden: Featured Haibuneer

Updated: Aug 8, 2023

hosts: Shalini Pattabiraman & Vidya Shankar


poet of the month: Lorraine A Padden


3rd August 2023

A Thursday Feature The team at The Haibun Gallery is pleased to feature Lorraine A Padden this month. You are in for a real treat!


Lorraine A Padden is an award-winning poet whose work does not shy away from the gritty, shadow-side of humanity. When she writes about suffering in her haiku, her work pulls at the heartstrings and makes one stop to ponder the real world issues inspiring this particular focus.


Lorraine was recently awarded the The Haiku Foundation Touchstone Award for Individual Poems. She is also the recipient of awards/recognition from Tricycle Magazine, the Haiku Society of America, the Bloodroot Haiku Competition, the Modern Kigo Project International Competition and the National Endowment for the Arts.


A former professional ballet dancer, Lorraine has two degrees in art history, is a vipassana meditation practitioner and a student in the Zen Peacemakers Order. Her first collection of poetry, UPWELLING - HAIKU, SENRYU, TANKA, and HAIBUN was published by Red Moon Press, September 2022.


THG:

Given your background in the performing arts, was writing a natural progression for you or did your interest in poetry/haibun evolve over time?


Lorraine:

I first became interested in contemporary haiku just a few years ago when I started following my dear friend Kristen Lindquist’s blog where she publishes a daily haiku. I remember studying the form in grade school and at that time we were introduced to its more formal 17-syllable structure which I liked very much. Decades later, reading Kristen’s explorations of a much briefer style of compellingly focused images, I was immediately intrigued by its freedom and nuanced resonance. For me, contemporary haiku is both foundation and springboard to explore haibun and other related forms.


Vanishing Point

My husband asks if I happen to know why the distance between the World Trade Center Twin Towers was slightly greater at the top than at the bottom of the two buildings.

from the couch to the floor

He says, “You can’t see it, but the towers were actually designed that way.”

they close their eyes

I flash back to a memory of standing in Tobin Plaza, craning my neck to follow the lines of the tower as far as I could. Then it hits me. “The curvature of the earth.”

and jump



Source:

Frogpond 44:3 Autumn 2021

Contemporary Haibun 17, 2022


THG:

9/11 impacted people across the globe. I can remember phoning an American colleague as I watched the news. I didn’t want my colleague to turn on their TV and have to face the news alone. It was gut wrenching. I can’t imagine how this would have impacted the people living in New York or those who lost friends or family that day.

The flow with Vanishing Point struck me. How you interspersed the before/after. Though you touch on the horror, you do so in a quiet, less traumatic, in-your-face way (in my humble opinion).

Can you tell us about how you crafted this haibun? Did it flow, did it require revisions?


Lorraine:

I first learned about the distance between the towers in a trivia contest years ago, and I guess it offered me another lens of awe through which to view human invention, and in this case, destruction. That tiny yet significant distance between the tops of the buildings was another way to know just what a magnificent feat of engineering they were. That detail we know by measuring, of course, and it also exists through juxtaposition with what we perceive about the earth through visual representations of its roundedness–it’s not a felt sense of knowing. It’s abstract and small but also incredibly monumental. So, the ways we take in reality had a lot to do with that haibun which also influenced the haiku in the suggestion of distance between a piece of furniture and the floor. I had read that people trapped at the top of the burning towers sometimes jumped, and they often did so together. The idea that in our final moments of extreme confrontation we might choose community and relationship over isolation is so very powerful, I think. Perhaps it’s these unthinkably devastating circumstances that truly reveal the monumental strength of human compassion in the small gesture of an embrace–an embrace that perhaps dwarfs even our most stunningly impressive built environments. I wrote several versions of that haibun before submitting it, and Lew Watts graciously suggested a title edit which fit the piece perfectly.


Prompt:

Write about a real-life event that shaped you or impacted you in some way.


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tejisethi13
tejisethi13
09 ago 2023

Edited version, suggestions from Lakshmi and Reid. Thank you!


The End is The Beginning


Since I turned an adult I have been attending antim sanskars. Being the eldest daughter and daughter in law, I have the responsibility to represent the family. Anybody who has been to the cremation grounds would know the meaning of ‘dead silence’. There are pyres all around, with flames rising high. At some distance you might spot a pile of cinders waiting to be collected. Amidst all this you hear faint crackling sounds as the body melts back into its origin—mitti. But we now have electric crematoriums that save us from witnessing all this.


When my father passed away, I realised there could be bigger dilemmas.…


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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
11 ago 2023
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Good one, Teji. Nicely worded. Your revision is tight and in place.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
07 ago 2023

https://www.trivenihaikai.in/post/celebration

Selected poems for haikuKATHA - issue #22 It goes LIVE on August 22

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
07 ago 2023

Trying a gembun terbalik Where the prose and haiku flip.

Created by Ai Li, who created gembun!


if only i could slide down the moonbow


his frozen stupor of non-being unfreezes


?? is the prose line too much?

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
09 ago 2023
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I like stupor & i thought of someone in a cryogenic freeze being unfrozen, so the original worked for me…like the moonbow & you combo was magic that reactivated him somehow. Susan


Wow!

Exactly my thoughts.

Thank you.Happy it's working well!

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#2 gembun


I had a milkshake last night and no boys came to my yard.


hummingbirds fighting for the feeder


(to really get this you have to have heard the song "Milkshake" by Kellis, who sings "My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGL2rytTraA)

comments welcome

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Sumitra  Kumar
Sumitra Kumar
09 ago 2023
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Hi Susan, Enjoyed your Haibun after hearing the song! Thank you for posting the link!

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Sumitra  Kumar
Sumitra Kumar
06 ago 2023

#1 8th August

Feedback and suggestions welcome!


Revised version:


Considering the suggestions from @Shalini Pattabiraman, I’ve made some minor changes in the narrative, removed the first haiku and revised the second. Hope this is better. Do let me know.


Red Carpet


Flitting around Frankfurt. Well, not really when it’s a business trip with a task at hand. We have to, with our engineers, unpack and erect a jumbo machine at our stall before the start of an International Fair in Germany; all the while nurturing hope that the equipment, well packed, had sailed the seas without incurring damages.


Renting a car, we take a long suburban ride from our budget hotel in Wuppertal to Düsseldorf. Be it narrow streets or…


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Sumitra  Kumar
Sumitra Kumar
09 ago 2023
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Hi Shalini, posted a revision. take a look when you’re free.

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