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THE HAIBUN GALLERY: 23rd April 2026 Billie Dee - Guest Editor

Updated: Apr 26

Editors on haikuKATHA: Shalini Pattabiraman, Vidya Shankar, Firdaus Parvez and Kala Ramesh


Guest Editor: Billie Dee

Host: Srinivas Sambangi

Featured Poet: Robert Hass


Introduction

 

This five-part series explores haibun written in response to poems from the Western tradition. I think of this pairing as a kind of literary ekphrasis, not commentary, exactly, but entering a canonical field, listening, and answering back.

A Thursday Feature

23rd April 2026


This week, we turn to Robert Hass, whose poem “Heroic Simile” begins in spectacle but ends in uncertainty. Hass moves from Kurosawa to Homer, from cinematic death to imagined woodsmen, then to the limits of imagination itself. What remains is not action, but aftermath: the stillness a dying body leaves in the air, and the uneasy recognition that art can bring us close to suffering without fully translating it.                          . . . A hero, dying, gives off stillness to the air. A man and a woman walk from the movies to the house in the silence of separate fidelities. There are limits to imagination.

Robert Hass. “Heroic Simile,” Praise. HarperCollins Publishers, Inc, 1979.

  

That tension matters to haibun. English-language haibun often works in precisely that border zone between event and residue, image and afterimage, perception and what remains unresolved. The prose can circle a scene, memory, or encounter, but the strongest haibun do not force completion. In response, I offer a haibun that begins after a film, then turns away from criticism and toward something harder to name: the bodily memory of death itself.

 

The Stillness Left Behind

              —after Robert Hass


After the matinee, we step out into full sun. We’d just seen a samurai film—not classic Kurosawa, something cheaper. But it held one frame of truth: a dying man on a hillside, closing his eyes and letting go with such authenticity, it did not feel acted.

 

On the walk to our car, you mutter about the poor production and dubbing, the graininess of vintage black-and-white reels. But I’m not listening to you—only to that warrior’s sigh, to a wind that carries the scent of alfalfa into town.

 

Later that evening, I hike the arroyo alone. Not to ponder old films, or you—but to think about my mother’s death: the shudder in that last breath. The quiet that took her.

 

Pines on the ridge sway in the breeze.

 

twilight hush

a bobwhite’s call pierces,

then fades

 

Contemporary Haibun Online 21.2, August 2025.

  

Prompt

 

Write from an image in a poem, film, or other work of art that stays with you after the experience is over. Let the prose follow that afterimage into a more private chamber of memory or recognition. Resist summary. Let the haikai carry what remains when thought falls quiet.


 

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Thank you, Billie, for being with us through this month. The prompt is very interesting.

_Srinivas


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#1


Ways to Looking at Things

 

To see a world in a grain of sand

And a heaven in a wild flower,

Hold infinity in the palm of your hand

And eternity in an hour...


---William Blake

 

It is in translated in Nepalese, included as a conclusion of a Saturday feature writing by Devendra Bhattarai, a reputed writer and journalist. It must be over fifteen years ago. Who says poetry does not sell? Who says a poet cannot make a living?

 

When gripped by excessive negativities, the image of the grain of sand truly helps me reshape my mind and find a complete new perspective to look at the world.


Among the text books and note copies…

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Love your prompt, Billie.

Prompt

Write from an image in a poem, film, or other work of art that stays with you after the experience is over. Let the prose follow that afterimage into a more private chamber of memory or recognition. Resist summary. Let the haikai carry what remains when thought falls quiet.

Lovely.

We are fortunate to have you here.

Thank you. I see many strong responses to this prompt.

_k

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Many thanks to you Kala, and to the rest of the Trivini editorial team. It's a privilege to be part of this project, to share my sources of inspiration with the greater haijin community.


🙏Billie

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mona bedi
mona bedi
Apr 25

Post #1

25.4.26


Beyond the edge


old album—

the glint

in my father’s eyes


It rained relentlessly that January night.

After mother’s call, it took me an hour to reach my parent’s house. It was too late by then.

Dad lay on the bed … motionless.


starlit night—

twinkling in the Milky Way

my father’s eyes


I touched his hand—it was still warm.


guiding me

through the storm—

my father’s eyes


Inspired by the song ‘My father’s eyes’ by Eric Clapton.


Mona Bedi

India

Feedback appreciated:)

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You have captured the final passing of your father with the braiding of the haiku through the prose delicately and thoughtfully Mona, a beautiful piece.

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In ninth grade English class, my teacher opened the worn textbook and said, “This is Alfred, Lord Tennyson.” She read Home They Brought the Warrior Dead as if it were a lesson in structure, pausing to explain rhyme, marking phrases with the edge of her chalk. The window panes were bright with afternoon sun, and dust moved slowly in the light above our heads. I waited for grief to enter the room the way she described meaning, line by line, but her voice stayed even, almost detached. When she closed the book, the silence felt heavier than anything she had said.

monsoon rain—

ants detour

one falling drop Sathya Venkatesh, India

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Thank you Joanna. Your feedback is reassuring and encouraging as I progress on this journey of haibun writing which I've just started exploring. Thank you once again.

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Thank you dear Kala. These glitches often happen when converting from pdf/doc.x/etc. to other formats for online presentation. We all appreciate how much work the Triveni team does; it's a huge endeavor.

🙏Billie

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