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TANKA TAKE HOME – 8th February 2023 | poet of the month – David Terelinck

Updated: Feb 9, 2023

hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury

Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature!

poet of the month: David Terelinck


8th February


David Terelinck/Tanka


blue plums

over-ripe and tasting

of dusk—

we never discussed

organ donation

[GUSTS 17, 2013]

the empty husk

of a milkweed pod—

how I wish

you’d never asked

how much I love you


[red lights 9:2, 2013]



We thank David Terelinck very warmly for taking time off to answer our questions.

Q 3: TTH: How do you develop a tanka? Please guide us through the stages of a poem.

DT: As short as a tanka is, sometimes it can be even more difficult and time-consuming to craft than a 50-line free verse poem. Each word matters and must carry weight. Often my tanka will start with a single word, idea, or image/scene that inspires me. And I will start then to ponder how best to work this into a tanka. Even though I write contemporary English tanka, I am mindful of the rich history of this form and try to be true to its origins and musicality as a short song.

I very rarely write tanka that does not require editing. This has only happened infrequently since I have been writing tanka. As I say, I weigh every word and ask myself if it is a value-add. I also consider the metaphors and take care to avoid slipping into cliché. If I am writing a tanka sequence, I pay attention to link and shift to progressive the narrative of the poem. And I have always been a believer in reading my work aloud before I send it out into the world. Tanka should be heard and reading it out loud helps ensure it sounds lyrical to the ear.

Q 4:

TTH: Who are your favourite tanka poets? In addition to tanka what other genres of poetry do you write or read? Tell us about some of the books you've enjoyed.

DT: I have so many tanka poets that I enjoy reading it would be difficult to narrow the list to just a handful of favourites. I enjoy tanka by a lot of the Australian poets for their local nuances and references. Tanka by Michelle Brock, Michael Thorley, and Kent Robinson, Carol Harrison and Hazel Hall inspire me. I have always been a fan of tanka from other poets such as Margaret Chula, Jenny Ward Angyal, Carole MacRury to name a few. But as I say, the poets I do love to read are too numerous to list them all.

Apart from tanka, I very much enjoy reading and writing free verse poetry. I have been writing quite a bit in this genre and have been enjoying some success with placing well in competitions or having my work published in journals or anthologies.

One book that I have always loved, and return to frequently, is “The Ink Dark Moon” translated by Jane Hirshfield with Mariko Aratani. This collection of tanka from women of the ancient court of Japan speaks to my soul on many levels. On the free verse front, I am enjoying various collections by Ted Kooser. I am also immersed in the wonderful writing of Connie Wanek in “Rival Gardens” and the work of Jane Kenyon found in “Let Evening Come.” These poets are masters at weaving simple language into extraordinary imagery and metaphors.

Biography: David Terelinck is nefarious for holding words hostage on a page until they agree to become a poem. On rare occasions, a ransom is paid in prize money.

He has published two tanka collections (Casting Shadows, 2011 and Slow growing Ivy, 2014), co-authored A Shared Umbrella with Beverley George in 2016, and has judged tanka competitions and co-edited on journals and anthologies. David’s tanka have won awards and many have been published in various journals and anthologies around the world. Currently, David is writing a lot of free verse poetry and has won an award or two, and has been published here and there, for his free verse efforts.

David loves gin & tonic and long beach and rainforest walks. David feels we need more poetry less politics, and firmly believes dolphins should be running the planet.



Challenge for this week:


Both of these tanka move one deeply, stir one’s heartstrings quietly. Each word is in its rightful place and carries its own significance and resonance. The choice of images and the cadence is perfect, allowing the reader to pause and connect with the poem in his/her own singular way.


We invite you to write tanka about the twilight period of one’s life, or about questions that cannot be answered.


Or, about the time of the day we call ‘dusk’.


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And remember – tanka, because of those two extra lines, lends itself most beautifully when revealing a story. And tanka prose is storytelling.

Give these ideas some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose with us here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you and write. You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside these themes too.

An essay on how to write tanka: Tanka Flights


PLEASE NOTE

1. Post only one poem at a time, only one per day.

2. Only 2 tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt.

Tanka art of course if you want to.

3. Share your best-polished pieces.

4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written. Let it simmer for a while.

5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.

6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.


We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 250 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.

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Unknown member
Feb 16, 2023

in the gloaming

Grandfather’s song

as he pumps

the porch swing

for the last time


Feedback welcome

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Unknown member
Feb 21, 2023
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Very lyrical. I love it :)

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
Feb 15, 2023

#1

.

dusk remains the same for all . . .

nevertheless

its high time

i ignore you

.

Feedback please


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Unknown member
Feb 15, 2023
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I like this :) ....... there is a lot of room for interpretation.... I read it as the way you want to ignore the dusk that leads to darkness.

However, I personally would have preferred a different L5. It is just me.

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Vidya Shankar
Vidya Shankar
Feb 14, 2023

orphaned at 15

he writes an elegy

with a smile

and i cry for a child

never born


(feedback most welcome)

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Vidya Shankar
Vidya Shankar
Feb 22, 2023
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Thank you, Amrutha.

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Unknown member
Feb 14, 2023

Chennai sea walk


even at midnight

the sea wave decks up …

the half-moon’s light

i can always choose

to grow or die


She was shrewd and intelligent. She had escaped from the grips of the trapped net. She followed the torch light and was not ready to give up. Her state was a kind of engagement for the crowd gathered around. The future looked very bleak with so many careless and insensitive people. But, she was not ready to give up yet.


a tiny olive ridley

struggles to reach the water

through the night …

with dawn on her

i long to see the end


(Chennai dairies, 11.feb.2023; dedicated to https://sstcn.org )


Feedback most welcome.

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Unknown member
Feb 14, 2023

Edited: (with my heartfelt thanks to @lakshmi, @Pritidi, @Amrutha and @Tish for their wonderful suggestions)


a tattered kite

hangs by a thread

from a naked branch...

such breathlessness

I feel


Original:


a tattered kite

hangs by a thread

from a naked branch on the tree

outside my window...

what is this breathlessness I feel


Feedback always welcome🌿

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Unknown member
Feb 21, 2023
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Thank you all so much -- @lakshmi, @Pritidi, @Amrutha and @Tish 🌷


I knew this was a bit word heavy when I put it out there, but I also knew that I would get some lovely input and feedback -- and I did! So grateful to all of you for your suggestions. I hope the edited version is reading better now 😊

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