hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury
Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature!
poet of the month: Rebecca Drouilhet
Biography: Rebecca Drouilhet is a retired registered nurse, author of two books, winner of numerous contest and awards. Her work has appeared in a vast majority of the top haiku and tanka journals. She lives an hour from New Orleans, the Mississippi Gulf Coast and Hattiesburg, MS, a culturally rich gumbo of Deep South Culture and cuisine. Playing with her large family and enjoying music and art occupy her days. She is currently a haiku moderator on Inkstone Poetry Forum.
Rebecca, thank you very much for taking the time to respond to our questions. Our readers will gain so much from your experiences. We look forward to reading your comments on the submissions here.
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TTH: Do you show your work in progress to anyone, or is it a solitary art that you keep close to your chest before letting it go for publishing?
I workshop a lot of my work on Inkstone Poetry Forum, but not all. Some pieces just come out whole. I have also learned to keep certain ideas close to my chest-especially those that are so broad and visionary that others might not understand them until they are more fully fleshed out or developed.
I do find the feedback of others incredibly useful in helping me to see my tanka the way other readers might perceive them. Thank you for this wonderful opportunity to share my work and inspiration
Here are two beautiful tanka from Rebecca for us to enjoy.
1)
a spring breeze
lifting my hair
the touch
of your fingertips
centers my desire
*Publication credits: Tanka Café in the Spring/Summer issue of Ribbons, Volume 17, Number 20.
2)
first breeze
of autumn
amid fading blossoms
a dragonfly
catches the last light
*Publication credits:
Ribbons, Fall 2021.
We end this month with the last of Rebecca's haunting poetry. Our deepest gratitude to her for sharing her work and thinking with us. These two lovely tanka are gentle reads. Desire and nature intertwine in the first one. And the second one is a goodbye of sorts, the ending of a season.
Challenge for the week:
Let's blur the lines between haiku and tanka... Please write a tanka using a kigo :). Try not to name the season. If your kigo is very local, then feel free to add an explanatory note so that we readers are enriched.
PLEASE NOTE
1. Post only one poem at a time, only one per day.
2. Only 2 tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt.
Tanka art of course if you want to.
3. Share your best-polished pieces.
4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written. Let it simmer for a while.
5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.
6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.
We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 250 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.
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Guiding stars
Until our neighbour buys a car that is a notch higher, our car functions perfectly. Until we learn that a friend has purchased a larger residence, our flat is a fine location to live. Until we learn that a cousin's kid got into a better school, our kid is in the best school. How quickly people may move us!
rainbows
in bubbles
raises me high
to drop into
this nothingness
Tanka prose
Revised thanks to Rupa:
A Summer Medley
Family reunions are a mixed bag.
Talking about our childhood anecdotes, we laugh and make merry, bonding over our secrets.
revisiting
our ancestral home
we fight
over mangoes fallen
from the tree dad planted
Cousins I had a crush on have a few grey hair left on their heads. The sister-in-laws look down upon my dressing sense. My favourite aunt has a difficulty remembering my name! Dad is long gone but his brother still looks down upon my filing skills. Little nieces and nephews call me aunty!!
wearing
her favourite sari
and glass bangles
I gradually become
a version of my mom
Feedback appreciated:)
A Summer medley
Family reunions are a…
#1 30th apr
feedback welcome
sunflower heads
swivel in homage
to the sun
I shift my stance
warming my face
closing down
the rental beach house
I return
a piece of driftwood
to where I found it
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