hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury
Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature!
poet of the month: Debbie Strange
25th January
Debbie Strange/Tanka
tracks of birds
meander through snow . . .
the surgeon
marks her left breast
with a cross
(1st Place, 2016 British Haiku Society Awards)
the ocean
was in a rage last night
but today,
these peace offerings
of blue mussels and kelp
(1st Place, 2018 Sanford Goldstein International Tanka Contest)
We are deeply grateful to you, Debbie, for taking time off to answer our questions.
Q 6 TTH: Do you show your work in progress to anyone, or is it a solitary art that you keep close to your chest before letting it go for publishing?
DS: My husband is a sensitive reader who sees all my work prior to publication. I am especially grateful to have a second pair of eyes on the fruits of my labour, because my vision is unreliable.
Biography:
Debbie Strange (Manitoba, Canada) is a chronically ill poet/artist whose creative passions connect her more closely to others, to the world, and to herself. Thousands of her poems and artworks can be accessed via her publication archive at: https://debbiemstrange.blogspot.com/
Challenge for this week:
The second tanka, which lends itself beautifully to recitation, starts with moments of turbulence and ends on a note of serenity. With each quiet reading, it offers a deeper and richer experience, not just of the natural world, but of the world of people too: their tendency to disrupt relationships and then re-forge them. Sadly, not all ‘rages’ transition to ‘peace offerings’.
We invite you to write tanka where you look at a trying or challenging situation with empathy, but composed distance.
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And remember – tanka, because of those two extra lines, lends itself most beautifully when revealing a story. And tanka prose is storytelling.
Give these ideas some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose with us here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you and write. You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.
An essay on how to write tanka: Tanka Flights
PLEASE NOTE
1. Post only one poem at a time, only one per day.
2. Only 2 tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt.
Tanka art of course if you want to.
3. Share your best-polished pieces.
4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written.
5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.
Let it simmer for a while.
6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.
We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 250 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.
Revised
surprised by the light
a creature scampers
into the dark...
we fear each other
and so it goes
Original
surprised by the light
a cockroach scampers
into the dark
we fear each other
and so it goes
*feedback welcome
learn colors
looking at the rainbow
with Mother …
unlimited happiness
now sweet memories
Original :
learn colors
childhood
cool balcony
saw a red kite
shady mango tree
please correct🙏
1.
learn colors
childhood
cool balcony
saw a red kite
shady mango tree
please correct🙏
#2
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(Please correct:
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in a blink of an eye
the way the milk spills
strange than ever
death knocks
as uninvited guests)
.
How about this?
.
milk spills over
in a blink of our eyes
the silence
as death
knocks at our place
.
Feedback please. Doubtful??
this slow forgetting of who I used to be and then there's grandma all she remembers are yesteryears
feedback please 🙏