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TANKA TAKE HOME - 20 November, 2024 | poet of the month - Ken Slaughter

hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury

Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature!

poet of the month: Ken Slaughter


20th November 2024



no more waiting

for the next breath...

at sixty four

I let go

my mother’s hand


Gusts 28



a bug

crushed under my foot

...yesterday

I released one

into the garden


Atlas Poetica Arthropod Feature




We had the pleasure of asking Ken a few questions, and he graciously took the time to answer them. The previous questions are in the earlier posts, here’s the fourth one.



Q 4. TTH: Who are your favourite tanka poets? In addition to tanka what other genres of poetry do you write or read? Tell us about some of the books you've enjoyed.


Ken: I am a huge fan of Susan Burch, Janet Davis, and Debbie Strange. I like Susan’s unassuming wit, and she can hit you with an unexpected line 5. I like Janet Davis because of her plain language and penetrating insights. Debbie’s poems, haiga, and taiga are always very original and just very human and relatable. As for tanka literature, my favorite book is The Way of Tanka, by Naomi Beth Watkin. The book is written for the average tanka poet, not necessarily for the “experts”. I love the examples she chose, and she has an easy and clear way of explaining things. I like anything edited by M. Kei. I find experimental work in his publications that wouldn’t be published anywhere else.


As for non-Japanese style poetry, I gravitate toward plain-speaking, easily understood poets. I’m a fan of William Stafford, Ted Kooser, and Billy Collins. All of these poets are easy to read, but very accomplished as well.



More about Ken:


Ken Slaughter is a tanka poet who also likes to write senryu. He was vice president of the Tanka Society of America for a couple of years. He won the annual TSA contest in 2015. He submits primarily to Ribbons, Gusts, Prune Juice and Failed Haiku. You will see some of Ken’s tanka here in the excellent publication haikuKATHA. He lives in Worcester, Massachusetts with his wife, and is the proud servant of two one-eyed cats.



Are you inspired?

Challenge for this week: Is there a particular scent that triggers a memory? Use a scent in your poem. See where that takes you.


Give this idea some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose with us here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you and write. You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.



PLEASE NOTE:

1. Post only one poem at a time.

2. Only two tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt.

Tanka art of course if you want to.

3. Share your best-polished pieces.

4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written.

Let it simmer for a while.

5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.

6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.


We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.

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the site is driving me nuts...it will not let me post replys

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It's rectified now.

We all went through this for 3 days.

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florence heyhoe northern ireland critique please


edit 1 thanks to Lorraine


on a sea breeze

the scent of guano

and cries of birds

a feather rising

lifts my heart


on the sea breeze

the scent of guano

the cries of birds

a feather rising

lifts my heart

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thank you Priti. we often visit Rathlin island of the coast of northern ireland where there is a huge colony of sea birds.

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Mohua
Mohua
25 nov

Reposting and deleting previous entry as unable to edit it.


Suraja's comment was "An intriguing phrase, the girl Friday. You've got several words that indicate smoke - I wonder if you could reword, especially L3. L3 also looks awkward, a dangling word."


#2


Revised (Thanks Suraja)


choking

on air pollution

a curl

of fragrant incense

delights the girl Friday


Mohua Maulik, India


Original


choking

on air pollution

a smoky

fragrance of incense

delights the girl Friday


Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated.

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Mohua
Mohua
26 nov
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Ah, thanks!!!

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#1


feedback welcome


the scent of coffee

wafts through the throngs

at the airport

a woman watches her child

longing for a vacation


Suraja Menon Roychowdhury, USA

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Thank you Sreenath. I like your revision, although it is changes the intent of my poem. I meant to say that there's no vacation for a mother with a small child :)

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Not able to edit my tanka even after several attempts. Tried last night and trying to do so now, this afternoon.

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It's not working. It's a wix's internal problem.

Rohan has written to them. Let's wait and see.


You can edit now!

It works.

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