hosts: Firdaus Parvez, Kala Ramesh, Priti Aisola & Suraja Menon Roychowdhury
Introducing a new perspective to our Wednesday Feature!
poet of the month: Ken Slaughter
20th November 2024
no more waiting
for the next breath...
at sixty four
I let go
my mother’s hand
Gusts 28
a bug
crushed under my foot
...yesterday
I released one
into the garden
Atlas Poetica Arthropod Feature
We had the pleasure of asking Ken a few questions, and he graciously took the time to answer them. The previous questions are in the earlier posts, here’s the fourth one.
Q 4. TTH: Who are your favourite tanka poets? In addition to tanka what other genres of poetry do you write or read? Tell us about some of the books you've enjoyed.
Ken: I am a huge fan of Susan Burch, Janet Davis, and Debbie Strange. I like Susan’s unassuming wit, and she can hit you with an unexpected line 5. I like Janet Davis because of her plain language and penetrating insights. Debbie’s poems, haiga, and taiga are always very original and just very human and relatable. As for tanka literature, my favorite book is The Way of Tanka, by Naomi Beth Watkin. The book is written for the average tanka poet, not necessarily for the “experts”. I love the examples she chose, and she has an easy and clear way of explaining things. I like anything edited by M. Kei. I find experimental work in his publications that wouldn’t be published anywhere else.
As for non-Japanese style poetry, I gravitate toward plain-speaking, easily understood poets. I’m a fan of William Stafford, Ted Kooser, and Billy Collins. All of these poets are easy to read, but very accomplished as well.
More about Ken:
Ken Slaughter is a tanka poet who also likes to write senryu. He was vice president of the Tanka Society of America for a couple of years. He won the annual TSA contest in 2015. He submits primarily to Ribbons, Gusts, Prune Juice and Failed Haiku. You will see some of Ken’s tanka here in the excellent publication haikuKATHA. He lives in Worcester, Massachusetts with his wife, and is the proud servant of two one-eyed cats.
Are you inspired?
Challenge for this week: Is there a particular scent that triggers a memory? Use a scent in your poem. See where that takes you.
Give this idea some thought and share your tanka and tanka-prose with us here. Keep your senses open, observe things that happen around you and write. You can post tanka and tanka-prose outside this theme too.
PLEASE NOTE:
1. Post only one poem at a time.
2. Only two tanka and two tanka-prose per poet per prompt.
Tanka art of course if you want to.
3. Share your best-polished pieces.
4. Please do not post something in a hurry or something you have just written.
Let it simmer for a while.
5. Post your final edited version on top of your original verse.
6. Don't forget to give feedback on others' poems.
We are delighted to open the comment thread for you to share your unpublished tanka and tanka-prose (within 300 words) to be considered for inclusion in the haikuKATHA monthly magazine.
the site is driving me nuts...it will not let me post replys
florence heyhoe northern ireland critique please
edit 1 thanks to Lorraine
on a sea breeze
the scent of guano
and cries of birds
a feather rising
lifts my heart
on the sea breeze
the scent of guano
the cries of birds
a feather rising
lifts my heart
Reposting and deleting previous entry as unable to edit it.
Suraja's comment was "An intriguing phrase, the girl Friday. You've got several words that indicate smoke - I wonder if you could reword, especially L3. L3 also looks awkward, a dangling word."
#2
Revised (Thanks Suraja)
choking
on air pollution
a curl
of fragrant incense
delights the girl Friday
Mohua Maulik, India
Original
choking
on air pollution
a smoky
fragrance of incense
delights the girl Friday
Mohua Maulik, India
Feedback appreciated.
#1
feedback welcome
the scent of coffee
wafts through the throngs
at the airport
a woman watches her child
longing for a vacation
Suraja Menon Roychowdhury, USA
Not able to edit my tanka even after several attempts. Tried last night and trying to do so now, this afternoon.