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open sky :: SAMVAAD | 9nd June

Updated: 4 days ago

hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak


darkening the shade

between touching apples

the shadow of a wren


-- John Barlow

(Commended, Haiku Presence Award 2014 )



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Thank you all for commenting. Since the poet hasn't offered us any backstory, your comments are all the more welcome. For me, it's a perfect example of a traditional haiku. 17 syllables too, if you haven't noticed :-)

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It's beautiful. Such close observation.

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mona bedi
mona bedi
5 days ago

An unusual ku! Lovely

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
5 days ago

Most beautiful.

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Beautiful!

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