open sky :: SAMVAAD | 7th January
- Aparna Pathak
- Jan 7, 2024
- 1 min read
hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak
mountain snow -
only the red sound
of a hawk
- Sandi Pray
( Published on social media)
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hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak
mountain snow -
only the red sound
of a hawk
- Sandi Pray
( Published on social media)
Very hard not to be influenced by this one while trying to write for a contest with the same theme: Red :-)
Placing 'red' in L2 is brilliant. It has lifted the poem out of the ordinary.
I love the 'red' here!
I love the contrast of the bold hawk versus the all-encompassing snow.
A lovely haiku, thank you for sharing.