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open sky :: SAMVAAD | 7th January

hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak


mountain snow -

only the red sound

of a hawk


- Sandi Pray


( Published on social media)



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Very hard not to be influenced by this one while trying to write for a contest with the same theme: Red :-)

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Placing 'red' in L2 is brilliant. It has lifted the poem out of the ordinary.

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I love the 'red' here!

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Paul Mena
Paul Mena
Jan 07

I love the contrast of the bold hawk versus the all-encompassing snow.

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Yes!

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A lovely haiku, thank you for sharing.

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