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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
Mar 11, 2024

A beautiful poem.

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Susan Yavaniski
Susan Yavaniski
Mar 08, 2024

As the daughter of the poem’s protagonist, I wanted to say that by some miraculous serendipity- quite amazing to Shawn and I- this post went live on Dad’s birthday, which he celebrated with gusto!

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sanjuktaa
Mar 09, 2024
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Glad that it happened that way. Happy birthday belatedly to your dad!

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Mar 08, 2024

Now I understand what it is all about. Lovely ku. Great selection.

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Shawn Blair
Shawn Blair
Mar 08, 2024
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Thank you, Kalyani.

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Padma Priya
Mar 08, 2024

This is such a beautiful ku. L1 and 2 talk about a decade long friendship and warmth which is so cherishable. When we read Shawn's comment the ku comes to life warming the heart. The rich and warm interactions depicted in the comment make the ku more lively and adorable. Also, I get to see how this warmth is transposed into such a crisp ku. Thank you Shawn and team Open Sky Samwad for this.

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Shawn Blair
Shawn Blair
Mar 08, 2024
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Thank you, Padma.

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Amoolya Kamalnath
Mar 08, 2024

This is a lovely ku. Though I understood the poem, I couldn't articulate it in the words I wanted to. Reading Shawn's comment on his own poem, totally warmed my heart.

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Shawn Blair
Shawn Blair
Mar 08, 2024
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Thank you, Amoolya.

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