open sky :: SAMVAAD | 17th July
- sanjuktaa
- Jul 17, 2022
- 1 min read
Hosts: Sanjuktaa Asopa & Vandana Parashar
spring—
crosswalk signals
chirping
--Ed Bremson
( Published February & March 2013 in Mainichi Daily Haiku & Asahi Shimbun)
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A delightful ku! Some crosswalk signals actually chirp.. Thank you for sharing this _()_
Such a gorgeous ku! Thanks Ed for penning it and Sanjuktaa for sharing it.
spring—
crosswalk signals
chirping
--Ed Bremson
What a surprising L3, Ed.
Your L 1 said - spring - so chirping birds is accepted! But your L2 took me away from birds chirping into a busy hour and a crowded mind!
Ha! What a refreshing L3.
So musical.
Thanks, Sanjuktaa for selecting this poem for open sky :: SAMVAAD.
I would love to hear Ed's take on this and the two editors' take on this ku too.
_()_
Lovely ku, Ed👌
A beautiful juxta of L 1 with L 2 & 3. Thanks Ed and thanks team.