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open sky :: SAMVAAD/ 12th January

Writer's picture: Aparna PathakAparna Pathak

hosts : Sanjuktaa Asopa & Aparna Pathak


a drowning man

pulled into violet worlds

grasping hydrangea


-- Richard Gilbert


( Noon:journal of the short poem; Haiku in English,Kacian et al, New York: Norton, 2013)

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sanjuktaa
5 days ago

Thanks a lot , Vandana, Sandip and Ranu Jain for your comments. I too love the vivid imagery of 'violet worlds'.

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Ranu Jain
Ranu Jain
5 days ago

Lovely imagery! The violet hydrangea in my garden will now always remind me of this ku.

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Sandip Chauhan
Sandip Chauhan
6 days ago

Absolutely stunning! You've created such a powerful image with so few words. The phrase 'violet worlds' really captures the imagination, it's so vivid and dreamlike.

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Lovely poem! The imagery is very vivid.

I take it as the healing power of nature.

It has happened to me a lot many times that when I’m feeling down, the sight of a new blooming flower, or a colourful bird or even a new tomato on my tomato plant cheers me up. Nature does save you from drowning.

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