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laughALONG! 26 November

Updated: 6 days ago

A TUESDAY FEATURE

hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K.Ramesh

guest editor: Muskaan Ahuja


Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.


Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.


Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.


If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.


Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.


The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.


Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!

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doing laundry

after the argument ---

for a moment

she holds his best shirt

by the collar


Michael Dylan Welch



Dear haijin, it's time to subscribe to laughter this week!! Nothing is more sacred in life than humour that adds life to our days!

This week, write a sentence senryu that doesn't need a kire (the cut) or a kireji (punctuation/the cut-marker).


in today's horoscope

the colour I dislike

is lucky for the day


-- Muskaan Ahuja



the wife who neglected him

makes elaborate plans

for his funeral

--- Anita Virgil


every resemblance

in their newborn

gets promptly claimed!


--- Kala Ramesh




the palmist gasps

and then asks to be paid

in advance


--- Carol Raisfeld



I look forward to reading your BEST SENTENCE SENRYU-- give your best shot!

Amuse or shake us with hysterical laughter!

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#1

feedback welcome


foreign student

at the lab meeting

I ask for a rubber*


In India a rubber is an eraser; in the US it is used to refer to a condom

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
4 days ago
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Spot on! That's a good one, Suraja.

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
5 days ago

02.12.2024

#2


unruly tongue

after three slices

of rum cake


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
4 days ago
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Ha ha.... it actually happened to me after two rum balls made by my colleague. Thanks for your feedback, Suraja.

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Muskaan Ahuja
Muskaan Ahuja
6 days ago

Thank you dear poets for sharing your poems in the month of November. It

was a pleasure to read such varied poems and provide feedback.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
6 days ago

#1, 1/12


leaves fall in our backyard not a single ours


Lakshmi Iyer, India

Feedback welcome

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#2 11-29-24


online dating

separating the wheat

from the chaff


Jennifer Gurney, US


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